Gramalot's Storybook
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "ZitheryZoo"A book of stories and poems for kids of all ages.
86 total reviews
Comment from Matoshka
How sweet, innocent and so tender. Special children are unaware of others who don't understand them. I loved your message and I love your heart. Blessings and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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How sweet, innocent and so tender. Special children are unaware of others who don't understand them. I loved your message and I love your heart. Blessings and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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Thank you for your comments and review. It is greatly appreciated.
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So welcome. Blessings
Comment from Ridley Williams
There are some beautiful thoughts expressed through this piece. It deals with a sensitive nature in a wonderful way. The syllable count left a little to be desired,(6 to 10, depending on the sentence), but the subject matter more than compensated, well done, Ridley
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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There are some beautiful thoughts expressed through this piece. It deals with a sensitive nature in a wonderful way. The syllable count left a little to be desired,(6 to 10, depending on the sentence), but the subject matter more than compensated, well done, Ridley
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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Thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from Gabrieltheswifter
I wish that i could give you six stars for this poem, it made me cry and think about a very special girl that I know. She is my girlfriends little sister. :P she will climb up into my lap and just sit she is the cutest thing, and she has autism. Thank you for this touching poem, her name is Olivia.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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I wish that i could give you six stars for this poem, it made me cry and think about a very special girl that I know. She is my girlfriends little sister. :P she will climb up into my lap and just sit she is the cutest thing, and she has autism. Thank you for this touching poem, her name is Olivia.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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WAHOO for Olivia! Thank you so much for your comments and reviews. I wish I could have gotten the six stars also (It seems evertime someone wants to give me one, they have none left.. LOL) Oh, well, thanks for thinking of it anyway. Have a great day and give Olivia a hug from gramalot 8.
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Its the thought that counts? :P i will.
Comment from Dawn Munro
What a very special and lovely sentiment expressed by this sweet poem! If only all the world could read it, and feel the genuine warmth and tenderness, the 'magic' of Lily's world.
Beautiful! Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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What a very special and lovely sentiment expressed by this sweet poem! If only all the world could read it, and feel the genuine warmth and tenderness, the 'magic' of Lily's world.
Beautiful! Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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Thank you, Dawn, for the wonderful comments and review. It is greatly appreciated.
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It was very much my pleasure!
Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
A warm loving tribute to a 'special' daughter carried along by numerous events in the girl's life that had a + effect on those who love her. As to the poem, tis a bit 'long in the tooth' and the lines are 'cobbled' together. But on the whole a poem of joy and jubilation.
Regards:
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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A warm loving tribute to a 'special' daughter carried along by numerous events in the girl's life that had a + effect on those who love her. As to the poem, tis a bit 'long in the tooth' and the lines are 'cobbled' together. But on the whole a poem of joy and jubilation.
Regards:
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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Thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
What a beautiful poem to a beautiful special little girl. You brought tears to my eyes as I read of her troubles. Even though not mentioned they make mine look small. Thank you for this golden poem.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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What a beautiful poem to a beautiful special little girl. You brought tears to my eyes as I read of her troubles. Even though not mentioned they make mine look small. Thank you for this golden poem.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review and comments. It is greatly appreciated.
Comment from pickthorn
A delightful, charming poem about little Lily, a special little girl with special needs. But Lily is truly blessed.
' Her Mommy and Daddy say with a smile,
She's not different... she's a gift from God!'
How true.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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A delightful, charming poem about little Lily, a special little girl with special needs. But Lily is truly blessed.
' Her Mommy and Daddy say with a smile,
She's not different... she's a gift from God!'
How true.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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Thank you for your comments and review. It is greatly appreciated.
Comment from emjaihammond
This is cute and bouncy and full of great ideas and very good messages. It's good to see a poem written for special needs kids. This one is an excellent example of what to do right. Well done.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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This is cute and bouncy and full of great ideas and very good messages. It's good to see a poem written for special needs kids. This one is an excellent example of what to do right. Well done.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and review. It is greatly appreciated.
Comment from tbacha58
Please keep on swinging, Lily dear,
Holding on tight to your ZitheryZoo.
'Cause God knew what he was doing
When He sent Lily for me and you!
Wow, what an amazing poem, for the children and even us, its so relaxing reading this poem. One can notice you do write poetry very well.
Terry
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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Please keep on swinging, Lily dear,
Holding on tight to your ZitheryZoo.
'Cause God knew what he was doing
When He sent Lily for me and you!
Wow, what an amazing poem, for the children and even us, its so relaxing reading this poem. One can notice you do write poetry very well.
Terry
Comment Written 18-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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Terry, thank you so much for your compliment, review and comments. It is greatly appreciated.
Comment from Louise Michelle
This is so charming! You might consider categorizing it under children's poetry. It is whimsical and fun and I could see it as a children's picture book. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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This is so charming! You might consider categorizing it under children's poetry. It is whimsical and fun and I could see it as a children's picture book. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 18-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2013
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Thank you, Lou. I have considered that as well. I appreciate your review and comments.
