Gramalot's Storybook
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "ZitheryZoo"A book of stories and poems for kids of all ages.
86 total reviews
Comment from onkughosh19
A poignant write....it touched my heart.These differently abled children can be a source of joy too--based on this theme the poet has done a briliant job of presenting before us the characteristics of Lily.She maybe a little different but like any other child, she is spirited and loves to romp and play and she is very sweet natured as she smiles at everyone.
A very thoughtful and realitic write.The picture is good and the title most apt.Highly recommended!
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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A poignant write....it touched my heart.These differently abled children can be a source of joy too--based on this theme the poet has done a briliant job of presenting before us the characteristics of Lily.She maybe a little different but like any other child, she is spirited and loves to romp and play and she is very sweet natured as she smiles at everyone.
A very thoughtful and realitic write.The picture is good and the title most apt.Highly recommended!
Comment Written 20-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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Onkughosh19, thank you for your wonderful comments and review. It is greatly appreciated. Happy that you liked it so much.
Comment from rjuselius
yes indeed. no matter what, the prayer of a child is more or less innocent and they often just wish for his/her family to be protected. nothing greedy like help me win the lotto:)
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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yes indeed. no matter what, the prayer of a child is more or less innocent and they often just wish for his/her family to be protected. nothing greedy like help me win the lotto:)
thank you for sharing!
rebekka x
Comment Written 20-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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Rjuselius, thank you for your comments and review. It is greatly appreciated.
Comment from Leineco
This really is a lovely poem, with a totally uplifting message.
Her infectious smile will win the hearts
Of all who ever doubted her worth
'Cause from the very beginning
Lily was a special birth.
what a great summation! Nice writing :-)
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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This really is a lovely poem, with a totally uplifting message.
Her infectious smile will win the hearts
Of all who ever doubted her worth
'Cause from the very beginning
Lily was a special birth.
what a great summation! Nice writing :-)
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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Leineco, thank you for your comments and review. It is greatly appreciated.
Comment from justmarly
Ohh this is a lovely little poem. I don't knopw here but I love her. She is so sweet. Yes thank God for the children. There will always be grace in this world as long as there are Lilys. You did a great job. Thank you for sharing. Jm
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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Ohh this is a lovely little poem. I don't knopw here but I love her. She is so sweet. Yes thank God for the children. There will always be grace in this world as long as there are Lilys. You did a great job. Thank you for sharing. Jm
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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Jim, thank you for your comments and review. It is greatly appreciated.
Comment from visionary1234
This is a delightful piece gram! I used to work a lot with special needs kids and so much of the time what you say is absolutely true! These kids are amazing, loved and lovable. Sweetie write!
:)Sharyn
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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This is a delightful piece gram! I used to work a lot with special needs kids and so much of the time what you say is absolutely true! These kids are amazing, loved and lovable. Sweetie write!
:)Sharyn
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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Sharyn, I love these kids. Thank you so much for your comments and great review. It is really appreciated.
Comment from boxergirl
You have done a good job creating your story poem and what a great story it is. Lily is indeed a special child who has brought much happiness to everyone who meets her. I really enjoyed this poem and the message it sends to us about how special all children can be. Good job and good luck!
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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You have done a good job creating your story poem and what a great story it is. Lily is indeed a special child who has brought much happiness to everyone who meets her. I really enjoyed this poem and the message it sends to us about how special all children can be. Good job and good luck!
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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Boxergirl, thank you so much for your wonderful comments and review. It is greatly appreciated.
Comment from Sagnik Das
Wonderful -- most admirably improvised. Presented in an array of alternately-rhymed quatrains (a/b, a/b), it indeed serves as being a vibrant repository to the sundry facets of puerile imagination & nostalgic complacency surrounding childhood.
Characterized by a mirthful undertone of radiance, it carries the reader off to some long-forgotten land of desolate enchantment, characterized by lucidity of style & simplicity.
In a word, ADORABLE.
My wholehearted wishes to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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Wonderful -- most admirably improvised. Presented in an array of alternately-rhymed quatrains (a/b, a/b), it indeed serves as being a vibrant repository to the sundry facets of puerile imagination & nostalgic complacency surrounding childhood.
Characterized by a mirthful undertone of radiance, it carries the reader off to some long-forgotten land of desolate enchantment, characterized by lucidity of style & simplicity.
In a word, ADORABLE.
My wholehearted wishes to you in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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Sagnik Das, thank you so much for your well wishes, your comments and review. It is greatly appreciated.
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My foremost pleasure.
Comment from GWHARGIS
what a sweet poem. I have a special needs grand daughter and she is a blessing as well. She can light up a room with her smile and she never really had to deal with being different. Now she's in middle school and every body loves her. Go sure know what he's doing. Sometimes it takes different to let us know it's okay to smile. nicely done
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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what a sweet poem. I have a special needs grand daughter and she is a blessing as well. She can light up a room with her smile and she never really had to deal with being different. Now she's in middle school and every body loves her. Go sure know what he's doing. Sometimes it takes different to let us know it's okay to smile. nicely done
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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Gwhargis, so agree with you. Thank you for your comments and review. It is greatly appreciated.
Comment from Irish Rain
i truly loved your precious poem about Lily...what an awesome, and important message it sends, my favorite line was that she never heard 'couldn't'...blessings to you tonight!
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2013
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i truly loved your precious poem about Lily...what an awesome, and important message it sends, my favorite line was that she never heard 'couldn't'...blessings to you tonight!
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
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Justjo, thank you so much for your comments and review. It is greatly appreciated.
Comment from allborn66
This is a wonderful poem. I'm not quite sure about the story in a poem requirement. It seems to me that you described a person rather than told a story - but I'm not a judge in the contest. The word choice is appropriate to the tone and theme. The picture is a good choice for this truly delightful poem.
Barbara
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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This is a wonderful poem. I'm not quite sure about the story in a poem requirement. It seems to me that you described a person rather than told a story - but I'm not a judge in the contest. The word choice is appropriate to the tone and theme. The picture is a good choice for this truly delightful poem.
Barbara
Comment Written 19-Sep-2013
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2013
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Thank you for your comments and review. I feel it tells the story of her feelings, life, etc. Hope it fits for the contest.
