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afraid

being afraid is not good

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Comment from 4tun81
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Be yourself. You are the only one who can be.
From a technical perspective you might change the font color so it could be read more easily and try to adjust into the 5-7-5 format.

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2013
    thank you so much.
Comment from Solitude Poet
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Hey there!
Nice words yet the format for 5-7-5 poetry is not what you have written. It doesn't match! Please check the rules but your wordings are excellent! :)

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2013
    thank you