I Choose Rainbows
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "A Stranger Unto Myself"Thoughts from the dark side
2 total reviews
Comment from zeldasmith
When I first started reading this I was thinking of that Zombie show on tv...I don't watch it but I've seen some parts of it when my son had it on...eerie...the poem further down reminds me of a time when I was numb to life and needed a spark of light to revive me...why don't you picture your poems with some color...would enhance the beauty of your writing. Good job poet.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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When I first started reading this I was thinking of that Zombie show on tv...I don't watch it but I've seen some parts of it when my son had it on...eerie...the poem further down reminds me of a time when I was numb to life and needed a spark of light to revive me...why don't you picture your poems with some color...would enhance the beauty of your writing. Good job poet.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2013
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What would I do without you?
Comment from webfoot
this is like a dream. sometimes a nightmare, and sometimes a passage of images, like dreams are
it really takes the reader on a journey
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2013
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this is like a dream. sometimes a nightmare, and sometimes a passage of images, like dreams are
it really takes the reader on a journey
Comment Written 30-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2013
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Thanks for the review. It is a dark poem written when I was in the midst of depression.
