I Choose Rainbows
Viewing comments for Chapter 127 "Soldier of Destiny"Thoughts from the dark side
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Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
Well done, do you plan to combine these wonderful free style pieces into a book? I can see that happening in a most successful way. I awarded a six to this poem for its clarity, it's message and the obvious intense thought that went into it. Well written and grammatically correct. Carolyn
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2013
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Well done, do you plan to combine these wonderful free style pieces into a book? I can see that happening in a most successful way. I awarded a six to this poem for its clarity, it's message and the obvious intense thought that went into it. Well written and grammatically correct. Carolyn
Comment Written 21-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2013
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Carolyn: Thanks for the reviews. I am honored by your words.
Norm
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You are welcome,Norm.
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You are welcome,Norm.
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You are welcome, Norm.
Comment from kiwijenny
I think time defines humanity for sure.. We are defined by time, mortal, physical ..but you make time too powerful .. The fact that we age and forget doesn't make us better...thanks for this it made me think... God bless
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2013
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I think time defines humanity for sure.. We are defined by time, mortal, physical ..but you make time too powerful .. The fact that we age and forget doesn't make us better...thanks for this it made me think... God bless
Comment Written 21-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2013
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Thanks for the warm revue. Your comments are greatly appreciated.
Comment from Jean Lagace
Now, I think I like that theory better than Einstein. At least I understand the half of it. Soldiers in my army might want to fight yours though. It would be time against memory lost. True, one could say that it is the same thing. Then, we will have a party and sign a truce.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2013
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Now, I think I like that theory better than Einstein. At least I understand the half of it. Soldiers in my army might want to fight yours though. It would be time against memory lost. True, one could say that it is the same thing. Then, we will have a party and sign a truce.
Comment Written 21-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2013
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Thanks for the warm revue. Your comments are greatly appreciated.
