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The Heart of Poetry

Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "Waterfalls"
'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway

26 total reviews 
Comment from sholessjo
Exceptional
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I love the 5-7-5 verse. When did you start writing? Have you entered any contests? I also want to thank you for being a fried. I have never used pictures. Are they free?

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2013
    Thanks, I am glad you enjoyed this one. My imagination started long before I learned to write :-) and I have been writing in one form or another all my life. I have entered a few contest, and no winner yet, but that's OK, it will happen some day. :-) maybe! There is so much talent on FS. Every winner definitely earns it. Yes, FanArt is free. Go to your poem site. Top will allow you to click on fanart, then type in subject, example: rainbow, dog, etc.. Then click search. When you find what you want, click choose it and it will go back to your poem page. Then click show it. Then write your poem and spell check and save In preview yes. You can edit, do color back ground etc. center text. Norm, I thought you might like to use pictures and was going to suggest that in my next review of your work. You can also edit what you have already posted and add a picture. Good Luck and I hope this information is helpful. I am glad to be your friend too. Carolyn
Comment from Rondeno
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It spouts in a jet,
or trickles in runnels, yet
it always stays wet.

Now look what you've done! You've got me at it, too!

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 22-Jun-2013
    Funny how these things affect folks! :-) Thanks so much. Carolyn
Comment from The Death
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Nice 5/7/5 describing natural phenomenon
the words when read have a nice flow and really complete in sense
sweet,enjoyable

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 22-Jun-2013
    Thank you so very much for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate you. Carolyn
Comment from donette1914
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very well done. it would be amazing a water fall did fall upward, but not happening. i love the photo and a well penned job it was a pleasure

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 21-Jun-2013
    And I appreciate your wonderful review. Carolyn
Comment from poetbear
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Straight to the point.
Great imagery and super image.
Reads well and makes sense.
It leaves an impact as Mother Nature does outstanding work.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 21-Jun-2013
    Wow, thank you for the wonderful review and award. I am glad you enjoyed 'Waterfalls'. Carolyn
reply by poetbear on 21-Jun-2013
    I like your work.

    PB
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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YES THIS IS WELL WRITTEN MY FRIEND I LIKED THE HUMOR ENCLOSED IN THIS SHORT FORM WELL DONE MY FRIEND I ENJOYED REGARDS JILL

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 21-Jun-2013
    Thanks Jill, I always appreciate your comments. Carolyn
Comment from tedanytime
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Fine 5-7-5 to describe the flow of water. There is much beauty in the waterfalls...some water falls from great height, other streams drop their level just inches,
are they too falls?

By the way I never did see this falls in Missouri when I lived there, wonder where it was...

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 21-Jun-2013
    I don't know either but it is lovely, I found the picture on FA attributed to a Missouri fall. I am glad you enjoyed the poem. So you lived here at one time? I love Missouri, lived in the State all my life, all____ years of it. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Darkhorse555
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falling in the window of natures wonders to your lovely piece I doubt we would have bother if it flowed up lovely piece I enjoyed

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 21-Jun-2013
    Many thanks, I am glad you enjoyed this one. Carolyn
Comment from amarherig14
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I like this short poem about a water fall.A truthful statement, water falls down not up.The picture was a good choice for your write.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 21-Jun-2013
    It was a fun one, thanks, Carolyn
reply by amarherig14 on 22-Jun-2013
    It was a fun read,Carolyn.You are welcome,Margie:))
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
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Short, sweet and to the point, Carolyn, and truer words were never spoken.

A very good 5/7/5. A good premise for a poem.

bichonfrisegirl aka Connie

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 20-Jun-2013
    Thanks Connie, I appreciate your comments :-) Carolyn