From our soul.
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Beyond the Ocean."Mostly romance.
14 total reviews
Comment from Shari_K
Beautiful words that bring hope and such clear, vivid imagery to the mind. I like how you begin it...
To dream
I must wake up,
allowing the imagination
to be free and fly,
soaring into deep
warm currents
of affinity.
How we must allow our imagination to be free and fly. Your poem flows smoothly and is a beautiful one!
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Beautiful words that bring hope and such clear, vivid imagery to the mind. I like how you begin it...
To dream
I must wake up,
allowing the imagination
to be free and fly,
soaring into deep
warm currents
of affinity.
How we must allow our imagination to be free and fly. Your poem flows smoothly and is a beautiful one!
Comment Written 31-May-2005
Comment from Bryana
mmmm...I think you're going to see
someone else beyond the ocean
besides your son. This poem makes one
dream, so soothing and beautiful.
Un abrazo mi amiga
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mmmm...I think you're going to see
someone else beyond the ocean
besides your son. This poem makes one
dream, so soothing and beautiful.
Un abrazo mi amiga
Comment Written 31-May-2005
Comment from Moonchild28
This is a very soothing to the senses. It has great imagery and it flows very smoothly. You have such a beautiful way of communicating and expressing your feelings to a loved one so far away.
Beyond the immense ocean
and majestic wrinkle
old mountains,
the fragrance
of your reasoning
reach me.
Magnetic transference,
enveloped in wisdom
and soft silk
of love.
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This is a very soothing to the senses. It has great imagery and it flows very smoothly. You have such a beautiful way of communicating and expressing your feelings to a loved one so far away.
Beyond the immense ocean
and majestic wrinkle
old mountains,
the fragrance
of your reasoning
reach me.
Magnetic transference,
enveloped in wisdom
and soft silk
of love.
Comment Written 31-May-2005
Comment from lerkun
what can I say but how your words have touched my soul from so far away.
the soothing flow as your words beckon to be immersed within my mind, swirled about for releshing of the taste by the senses so divine....lerk
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what can I say but how your words have touched my soul from so far away.
the soothing flow as your words beckon to be immersed within my mind, swirled about for releshing of the taste by the senses so divine....lerk
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 31-May-2005
