Employed
Rondeau Redouble - Work Ethics Vs Starvation40 total reviews
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
The poem says it all (almost), and the picture of the empty hammock put to sea says the rest of it. The rondeau you wrote is in perfect form. Obviously having to step in to help bring in the bacon has not damaged your poetic talent--only left less time for it, of course. My best to you, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
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The poem says it all (almost), and the picture of the empty hammock put to sea says the rest of it. The rondeau you wrote is in perfect form. Obviously having to step in to help bring in the bacon has not damaged your poetic talent--only left less time for it, of course. My best to you, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 05-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
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Many thanks for your delightful review Jeanie.
Hugs P
Comment from despiser
When the potential employer asks "tell me a little about yourself" - just recite this, it's a done deal Bunns
It's about time you got off that nice butt before it flattens to a pancake lol.
Very good write Wabbity. Keep those ears up for opportunity and good wuck!
-D xx
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2013
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When the potential employer asks "tell me a little about yourself" - just recite this, it's a done deal Bunns
It's about time you got off that nice butt before it flattens to a pancake lol.
Very good write Wabbity. Keep those ears up for opportunity and good wuck!
-D xx
Comment Written 05-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2013
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LOL Well when da empwoyer is moi den Bunky can say what she funkin likes! LMTO
Thanks for a gweat weeview honey bunn.
Hugs
da fuckin Wabbit
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I'll work for ya - pay me under the table LMTO
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Is that a cawwot in yaw twousers...?
Or are you just funkin glad to work for moi?
Nayo!
LOL
XXX
Comment from Ankh
Employed! How droll!
No more a Lady of Leisure lol.
I marvel at the way you get a piece to flow so well. You make it look so easy, when I know how hard it is. Nice work hun
Seth x
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2013
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Employed! How droll!
No more a Lady of Leisure lol.
I marvel at the way you get a piece to flow so well. You make it look so easy, when I know how hard it is. Nice work hun
Seth x
Comment Written 05-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2013
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No, the leisure is long gone darlin'. I need a rocket up my arse and need to get back into the swing.
Any time you want a METER lesson...just say the word. I'd be happy to help you out...*smirk*
Cheers P
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Comment from adewpearl
You use the refrain lines derived from the lines of the first stanza to good effect in this well-composed rondeau redouble
excellent use of abab rhyming
great alliteration in wailing winds prevail and plead
you convey the speaker's emotions well in responding to this need to contribute to the family's coffers
Brooke
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2013
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You use the refrain lines derived from the lines of the first stanza to good effect in this well-composed rondeau redouble
excellent use of abab rhyming
great alliteration in wailing winds prevail and plead
you convey the speaker's emotions well in responding to this need to contribute to the family's coffers
Brooke
Comment Written 05-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2013
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Thanks Brooke...yes the coffers are nearly empty with the hubby only able to work part time due to his leg so its back to the grind for Miss Talented! LOL
Cheers P
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Comment from LoveLifeKnight
oh i seee now and i know how you feel!! you are as talented and hard working as ever of course!!! employment can be annoying no matter how grateful we are!
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2013
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oh i seee now and i know how you feel!! you are as talented and hard working as ever of course!!! employment can be annoying no matter how grateful we are!
Comment Written 05-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2013
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thanks so much for stopping by.
Cheers P
Comment from Jaq Cee
This is a wonderful poem my Pippalicious. Great flow and really tidy rhymes.
Unfortunately we need money to live and especially when you have wee children. Don't worry if you take time to review, your family needs come first. Love n hugs, Jaq xxx
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
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This is a wonderful poem my Pippalicious. Great flow and really tidy rhymes.
Unfortunately we need money to live and especially when you have wee children. Don't worry if you take time to review, your family needs come first. Love n hugs, Jaq xxx
Comment Written 05-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
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Awww thanks Jaqalish...your review was a treat and yes the time is dwindling and has been for sometime. I knew the day would come but it doesn't make it any easier. Many thanks for the sixer.
Cheers Pippalisha
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Comment from Jackarrie
This is the sign of the times, so many people affected by the present day economy which is global. We are lucky to keep the roof over our heads, when it was so long ago when we felt we could spend without question.
A great story in a poem so well written. well done.
Mary
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
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This is the sign of the times, so many people affected by the present day economy which is global. We are lucky to keep the roof over our heads, when it was so long ago when we felt we could spend without question.
A great story in a poem so well written. well done.
Mary
Comment Written 05-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
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Indeed a sign of the times. Many thanks for stopping by.
Cheers P
Comment from Joy Graham
Your picture caught my attention on the main page. We are planning our first holiday ever to Mexico in December and I can't wait to see that lovely beach and laze around a bit :) I'm unemployed and could relate to your poem very much. Hope all goes well for you and your new job. Check in when you can but focus on feeding you and your family first. Take care!
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
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Your picture caught my attention on the main page. We are planning our first holiday ever to Mexico in December and I can't wait to see that lovely beach and laze around a bit :) I'm unemployed and could relate to your poem very much. Hope all goes well for you and your new job. Check in when you can but focus on feeding you and your family first. Take care!
Comment Written 05-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
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Thanks Joy...I appreciate you stopping by. Much appreciate your thoughtful review.
Cheers P
Comment from cvcopac
This reads like an everyday page out of my life. I see either your ethics are rushed or 'Fleed' and shambling, or you've gone competitive with Webster. Seriously, I hope all's good and wish you luck in your search efforts, knowing full well we can never choose the just right job. Sometimes wit must take a bow and a back seat. Best of luck. Kenny
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
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This reads like an everyday page out of my life. I see either your ethics are rushed or 'Fleed' and shambling, or you've gone competitive with Webster. Seriously, I hope all's good and wish you luck in your search efforts, knowing full well we can never choose the just right job. Sometimes wit must take a bow and a back seat. Best of luck. Kenny
Comment Written 05-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
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My special K...thanks so much, I seriously appreciate your enchanting review. I didn't choose the job...the job chose me. I am back working for myself, I couldn't work for a boss again if I tried. You know, I'm the assertive take no BS type...haha.
Perfect temperment to work for thyself. Wish me luck...I've quoted on 4 jobs and got every one. Shit I'll have to put me prices up.
Thanks for the sixer as always your reviews pep me up.
Cheers
Your friend P
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You are about the fifth person to pick me on "fleed"...what the fluck??? LOL
I honestly thought it was a word..you know - the act of fleeing ain't fled...I consider I was in mid flee hence slight past tense. Make any sense? Nup. Thought not.
Hugs anyway and I just LOVE to give Webster a run for his damn money. Hahaha
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You don't have an equal. I'd chain you between the stove and the goddamned refrigerator (LMAO). you'd be the perfect boss for yourself and this way you may keep your wit and creativity employed. Outside bosses frown on both. Fuck Webster, anyway. He's a pain in the thumb.
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Hmmm...chained between whitegoods and a hot place.
So...who's crackin' the whip? LMAO
I agree, Webster can go to hell...I find Oxford so much more appealing...NOT!
And she has fleed...
X
Comment from oNray
Well told, a sad- sad story about this young beautifully writer that had to bury her dreams and work in a soup kitchen for starving children- Bravo good woman bravo
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
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Well told, a sad- sad story about this young beautifully writer that had to bury her dreams and work in a soup kitchen for starving children- Bravo good woman bravo
Comment Written 05-Aug-2013
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2013
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LOL You analyse this SO well...the beautiful princess is now locked away and faces the daily struggle of getting those hands dirty.
Ahhh, the shame of it all. Haha
Thanks so much oNray. Cheers P xo
