The Bite Club
Five shark survivors form a club.16 total reviews
Comment from KarlAnonymous
I enjoyed this poem. Nice use of alliteration throughout. Vivid descriptions especially the sea turning sapphire to sanguine. Well done.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2013
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I enjoyed this poem. Nice use of alliteration throughout. Vivid descriptions especially the sea turning sapphire to sanguine. Well done.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2013
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Hi Karl, Thanks so much for reading; glad you like the form of writing. Cheers, Kay.
Comment from SteveY
How tragic, but how beautifully expressed in your thoughtful poetry! Just excellent. I can become mezmerized by your poetic language.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2013
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How tragic, but how beautifully expressed in your thoughtful poetry! Just excellent. I can become mezmerized by your poetic language.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2013
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Hi Steve, Thanks so much for reading; thought I would have a go at double alliteration, just for fun. Glad you like it. Cheers, Kay.
Comment from Rmocruz
Alliteration is abundantly employed.
An interesting story presented in free verse.
It has been stated that sharks do not prefer
humans as food.
Well written overall.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2013
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Alliteration is abundantly employed.
An interesting story presented in free verse.
It has been stated that sharks do not prefer
humans as food.
Well written overall.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2013
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Thank you so much for reading and appreciation my double dose of alliteration - first time I have tried it. No, sharks don't like humans as food! Cheers, Kay.
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You're welcome Kay.
Rich.
Comment from INtity
Very cool poem with the alliterations. Very good wordplay as well. I only wish it was longer because it was very good. Reminds me of a rapper named blackalicious who did rhymes with words starting with a and went to z. Anyways great poem.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2013
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Very cool poem with the alliterations. Very good wordplay as well. I only wish it was longer because it was very good. Reminds me of a rapper named blackalicious who did rhymes with words starting with a and went to z. Anyways great poem.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2013
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Thanks so much for your appreciation of my double dose of alliterations. I may write another and use the whole alphabet. LOL - Kay.
Comment from tedanytime
Your verse certainly tells of the danger in shark infested waters. Good title to the verse and author info gives good insight.
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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2013
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Your verse certainly tells of the danger in shark infested waters. Good title to the verse and author info gives good insight.
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Comment Written 19-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2013
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Hi Ted, Thanks for reading - don't go in the water! LOL. K.
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
This is an awesome piece and your authors notes a fabulous. If people no when they feed why in the world would they get in the water at that time? Great piece. god loves you and so do I.
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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2013
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This is an awesome piece and your authors notes a fabulous. If people no when they feed why in the world would they get in the water at that time? Great piece. god loves you and so do I.
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Comment Written 19-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2013
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Hi Evelyn, People don't realise the imminent danger from sharks. Australia is a surf-loving nation - we do have shark nets. Love, Kay.
