What?
A little fun with punctuation.36 total reviews
Comment from Gutter Flower
Excellent work! Your witty writing made me laugh :-) Thank you for choosing my photograph to go along with this terrific spoof!
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2013
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Excellent work! Your witty writing made me laugh :-) Thank you for choosing my photograph to go along with this terrific spoof!
Comment Written 19-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2013
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It was tough finding a photo for this piece. The buildings and the overpass made a great fit.
Comment from SteveY
This is increadibly good! I had to use the explanation mark here! And here too! So flippin creative! I can't believe it. This was a very fun read, I'm just sorry it had to end.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2013
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This is increadibly good! I had to use the explanation mark here! And here too! So flippin creative! I can't believe it. This was a very fun read, I'm just sorry it had to end.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2013
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It had to end- Because!!!! What? Thanks for the review.
Comment from Schalk Jacobs
Absolutely brilliant. Lost me for a second in the middle but that was fine. Wanted to read it again. Well done on a fine answer to the prompt and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2013
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Absolutely brilliant. Lost me for a second in the middle but that was fine. Wanted to read it again. Well done on a fine answer to the prompt and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2013
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Thanks for the great review. It was a blast to write
Comment from Treischel
A fabulous story that had me intrigued from beginning to end with your personification of punctuation. Cleverly written. Wonderful imagination in the use of writing skills. Very enjoyable.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2013
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A fabulous story that had me intrigued from beginning to end with your personification of punctuation. Cleverly written. Wonderful imagination in the use of writing skills. Very enjoyable.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2013
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Sometimes things just roll out. Thanks for the review
Comment from Titanx9
I enjoyed reading your story. The dialogue is very engaging and is crispy enough to carry the story along. It is timely for me because I am tutoring a group of folks, about the basics of English, who are studying for their GED. This is an excellent piece. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2013
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I enjoyed reading your story. The dialogue is very engaging and is crispy enough to carry the story along. It is timely for me because I am tutoring a group of folks, about the basics of English, who are studying for their GED. This is an excellent piece. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2013
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Kind of shows what them punctuation is like. Use it if you want.
Comment from Zue65
Wow this is something new, putting life to question, comma, period and exclamation and make them act not as ordinary beings but a tough investigating team tasked to keep all the criminals in check, in a happy banter that develops their characters close to what they really do in a writing a neat paragraph, is a tough job for a writer who is not that imaginative as this author. I salute your creativity, well done.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2013
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Wow this is something new, putting life to question, comma, period and exclamation and make them act not as ordinary beings but a tough investigating team tasked to keep all the criminals in check, in a happy banter that develops their characters close to what they really do in a writing a neat paragraph, is a tough job for a writer who is not that imaginative as this author. I salute your creativity, well done.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2013
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Thanks it feels good to know someone enjoyed this piece.
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It is a pleasure to read your work "What", if you do have time to spare, please take a look at my 5--7-5 Poetry entry "Embrace". God bless.
Comment from quicksandyamurray
The story is OK, but I just couldn't get "into it". School house rock did a good job of holding the attention for that sort of thing. I was expecting a story of fan story friends as super hero's and crime fighting, not handling the English class and the proper set up of sentences. I was disappointed in two directions. One: there were only three entries. Two: two out of three were lessons in sentence structure and the use of punctuation under the guise of super hero qualities. I had a difficult time choosing so, I simply took one and voted.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2013
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The story is OK, but I just couldn't get "into it". School house rock did a good job of holding the attention for that sort of thing. I was expecting a story of fan story friends as super hero's and crime fighting, not handling the English class and the proper set up of sentences. I was disappointed in two directions. One: there were only three entries. Two: two out of three were lessons in sentence structure and the use of punctuation under the guise of super hero qualities. I had a difficult time choosing so, I simply took one and voted.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2013
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Well you can't blame me for the amount of entries or what others write about. We all have our own styles, sorry mine didn't appeal to you.
Comment from Bill Schott
My favorite sight gag "Exclamation Markie,...over there to your right" That along with the loosing of questions made this little romp a fun read.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2013
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My favorite sight gag "Exclamation Markie,...over there to your right" That along with the loosing of questions made this little romp a fun read.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2013
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Well she is always on the right of a word! Ha! Thanks!
Comment from Norbanus
I beg to differ on the issue of innocence.These characters are all guilty of overacting, as one might expect for the melodrama they portray. Super job!
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2013
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I beg to differ on the issue of innocence.These characters are all guilty of overacting, as one might expect for the melodrama they portray. Super job!
Comment Written 16-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2013
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Thanks. Over acting, me! How could you say such a thing? Ha!!!
Comment from N.K. Wagner
This is a clever, well written spoof. I enjoyed your personifications of the punctuation marks. A light hearted introduction or review. :) nancy
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2013
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This is a clever, well written spoof. I enjoyed your personifications of the punctuation marks. A light hearted introduction or review. :) nancy
Comment Written 16-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2013
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Thanks, it was fun
