Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

i like this one, sholessjo, the anticipation of the question that increases the intensity of love as she waits for the question to be asked and answers with an affirmative answer. so different from my first reaction to my husband's proposal. when he asked me to marry him, i told him he was crazy. but he worked on me and i said yes almost fourteen years ago.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2013

Thank God you said yes!!!!!!!!

Norm

Comment from Solitude Poet

Excellent

Hey there!
Welcome to FanStory! :)
And just beautiful, magnificent thoughts and flow of words on proposing!
Great going! My wishes to you to write more and get more feedback!
Hope my review brought a smile on your face! :)

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2013

Thanks for the compliment. It makes me feel good.

reply by the author on 10-Jun-2013

Thanks for the compliment. It makes me feel good.

reply by the author on 10-Jun-2013

Comment from lorijean

Excellent

Such a lovely poem, of the proposal really sweet, well written and a pleasure to read, it just flows off the page, thank you for sharing...

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2013

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2013

Thanks for the compliments. I appreciate the good review.

reply by the author on 10-Jun-2013

Thanks for the compliments. I appreciate the good review.

reply by the author on 10-Jun-2013

reply by lorijean on 10-Jun-2013

Ooops got your message back 3 times..