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Wait! A wee wee light is noo cummin' oan.105 total reviews
Comment from God's Writer
A right grand poem ye bony lad. I be missing ye. I am not a very active member of fanstory anymore. I spend too much time writing. My e-mail address is weirk53@yahoo.com. I would like to stay in contact with you. I am writing a lot more Scottish and Irish poetry and sometimes need clarification on words and spelling. So please e-mail me so I have your e-mail so I can ask questions. Thank you for such a delightful poem to read and listen too.
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A right grand poem ye bony lad. I be missing ye. I am not a very active member of fanstory anymore. I spend too much time writing. My e-mail address is weirk53@yahoo.com. I would like to stay in contact with you. I am writing a lot more Scottish and Irish poetry and sometimes need clarification on words and spelling. So please e-mail me so I have your e-mail so I can ask questions. Thank you for such a delightful poem to read and listen too.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2013
Comment from oNray
You old friend invest a great deal of time in a poem. I then have taken the time to read it. I think this two - times poetic !! Once in your dialect and once in content
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You old friend invest a great deal of time in a poem. I then have taken the time to read it. I think this two - times poetic !! Once in your dialect and once in content
Comment Written 11-Jun-2013
Comment from Titanx9
This is one of the most heartfelt and charming poems I've read today! I love it and who wouldn't like to be the recipient of "that Bonny lass, an' a work o' sculptured class." I had one of those real "sigh" moments after reading this one, I even called my daughter into my writing room to listen to the beautiful and melodic sound of your voice reading this piece. Thanks for sharing a masterfully crafted poem.
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This is one of the most heartfelt and charming poems I've read today! I love it and who wouldn't like to be the recipient of "that Bonny lass, an' a work o' sculptured class." I had one of those real "sigh" moments after reading this one, I even called my daughter into my writing room to listen to the beautiful and melodic sound of your voice reading this piece. Thanks for sharing a masterfully crafted poem.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2013
Comment from nancy_e_davis
I for one love your Scottish vernacular. I find it charming. Yes it takes a little longer to read but worth it I would say. I find it to be romantic though quaint. The tenderness in the lines was evident and I really enjoyed it. I couldn't access he voice but would dearly love to hear it read. Very nice, Nancy
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I for one love your Scottish vernacular. I find it charming. Yes it takes a little longer to read but worth it I would say. I find it to be romantic though quaint. The tenderness in the lines was evident and I really enjoyed it. I couldn't access he voice but would dearly love to hear it read. Very nice, Nancy
Comment Written 11-Jun-2013
Comment from kiwigirl2821
You will always be one of my favorite poets and the language you use is invigorating and romantic. This piece is a fabulous tribute to the woman you love. Bravo. xoxo deborah aka Kiwi
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You will always be one of my favorite poets and the language you use is invigorating and romantic. This piece is a fabulous tribute to the woman you love. Bravo. xoxo deborah aka Kiwi
Comment Written 11-Jun-2013
Comment from ravenblack
I commend you for your command of the vernacular . that being said, I did find it distracting to the poem as a whole. really had to work it to read it. I am not familiar with your work and would be interested in seeing other works not vernacular-heavy. " climbin' Everest without your shoes" - good line.
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I commend you for your command of the vernacular . that being said, I did find it distracting to the poem as a whole. really had to work it to read it. I am not familiar with your work and would be interested in seeing other works not vernacular-heavy. " climbin' Everest without your shoes" - good line.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2013
Comment from RKagan
This is a beautiful and romantic poem filled with heartfelt and honest emotion. I love the reading it makes the poem even more effective. Great job
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This is a beautiful and romantic poem filled with heartfelt and honest emotion. I love the reading it makes the poem even more effective. Great job
Comment Written 11-Jun-2013
Comment from robina1978
I thought that was what you wrote that you wife had not been well for a while. Glad to hear she is doing better now. Is this why we missed you a period.
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I thought that was what you wrote that you wife had not been well for a while. Glad to hear she is doing better now. Is this why we missed you a period.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2013
Comment from CR Delport
Ah, that is such a beautiful poem that is written for a beautiful person. How do I know that? Through your words. Thanks for sharing.
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Ah, that is such a beautiful poem that is written for a beautiful person. How do I know that? Through your words. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2013
Comment from carlwayne
I liked this poem...Althought I had a hard time reading it..
But I got a good laugh at myself when I tried to read it out loud. God Bless!
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I liked this poem...Althought I had a hard time reading it..
But I got a good laugh at myself when I tried to read it out loud. God Bless!
Comment Written 11-Jun-2013
