Thank Heaven
Wait! A wee wee light is noo cummin' oan.105 total reviews
Comment from NicciFaye
Truly a compassionate poem very detail and emotionally filled with love and memories. Thank you for the sound bit, it helped a lot. What really made this poem truly beautiful is my mind is only able to process it from my persecptive, but hearing your voice and accent allowed me to enjoy it from yours. Excellent.
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Truly a compassionate poem very detail and emotionally filled with love and memories. Thank you for the sound bit, it helped a lot. What really made this poem truly beautiful is my mind is only able to process it from my persecptive, but hearing your voice and accent allowed me to enjoy it from yours. Excellent.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2013
Comment from c_lucas
It matters not the culture in which you are born. Love will be there for you to seek out for the happiness it will bring. This is very well written.
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It matters not the culture in which you are born. Love will be there for you to seek out for the happiness it will bring. This is very well written.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2013
Comment from hubba marwa
Great ! GREAT ! great !
Very nice poem ! Your poem really grips the reader all along ! It is informative also ! In short it is EXCEPTIONAL !
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Great ! GREAT ! great !
Very nice poem ! Your poem really grips the reader all along ! It is informative also ! In short it is EXCEPTIONAL !
Comment Written 12-Jun-2013
Comment from Ed_Anderson
I only give out 6 stars when a piece really sets itself apart. The poem is good by itself but adding the authors voice to it, set it apart and really made it great. Good job thinking outside of the box
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I only give out 6 stars when a piece really sets itself apart. The poem is good by itself but adding the authors voice to it, set it apart and really made it great. Good job thinking outside of the box
Comment Written 11-Jun-2013
Comment from KarlAnonymous
First, thank you for the audio to go along with this. Not because it would have been bad without it, but because it adds so much more to it than my American accent trying to read it. A truly beautiful poem. And thank you as well to the list you've provided with it. I will definitely read more.
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First, thank you for the audio to go along with this. Not because it would have been bad without it, but because it adds so much more to it than my American accent trying to read it. A truly beautiful poem. And thank you as well to the list you've provided with it. I will definitely read more.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2013
Comment from TiffanyLeeBaldwin
What an amazing write. I must add a thank you for the notes after the poem. This took a lot of work and I can tell was written with so much heart and emotion. Great Job. Very enjoyable read.
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What an amazing write. I must add a thank you for the notes after the poem. This took a lot of work and I can tell was written with so much heart and emotion. Great Job. Very enjoyable read.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2013
Comment from L. Sherman
I found myself utterly captivated in the reading of this piece. I love the language/accent and it really just lulled me into a quite peaceful place to be read to. It was a bit hard to comprehend in places, so reading along helped, but for the most part, I'd say this was a successful endeavor.
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I found myself utterly captivated in the reading of this piece. I love the language/accent and it really just lulled me into a quite peaceful place to be read to. It was a bit hard to comprehend in places, so reading along helped, but for the most part, I'd say this was a successful endeavor.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2013
Comment from Charade
Well it really helped to hear it spoken, it makes the words when I read them smoother.
I like the heritage behind the poem, though I find it a bit difficult at times - but that's on me, not you.
Thank you for sharing this true story, I've enjoyed it!!!!
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Well it really helped to hear it spoken, it makes the words when I read them smoother.
I like the heritage behind the poem, though I find it a bit difficult at times - but that's on me, not you.
Thank you for sharing this true story, I've enjoyed it!!!!
Comment Written 11-Jun-2013
Comment from gene roush
This is very nice.
I believe that all poetry should be read aloud. This piece has a nice rhythm and rhyme that plays well with the verse and message.
The Scottish vernacular gives it a prep school feel that I'd dismissed into my past.
Thanks for sharing
Gene
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This is very nice.
I believe that all poetry should be read aloud. This piece has a nice rhythm and rhyme that plays well with the verse and message.
The Scottish vernacular gives it a prep school feel that I'd dismissed into my past.
Thanks for sharing
Gene
Comment Written 11-Jun-2013
Comment from visionary1234
No need at all to apologize dear - I've been delighting in "Monarch of the Glen" for the last few weeks and used to read Robbie Burns as a kid! Delightful story and utterly unique - I wish you and your bonnie lass well!
Yea ken( ,)whin yea see a butterfly alight, (spacing error) - and you might want to fix the spacing between the last few verses???
Good idea to do an author recording!!!
:)Sharyn
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No need at all to apologize dear - I've been delighting in "Monarch of the Glen" for the last few weeks and used to read Robbie Burns as a kid! Delightful story and utterly unique - I wish you and your bonnie lass well!
Yea ken( ,)whin yea see a butterfly alight, (spacing error) - and you might want to fix the spacing between the last few verses???
Good idea to do an author recording!!!
:)Sharyn
Comment Written 11-Jun-2013
