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Court Humour...43 total reviews
Comment from adewpearl
strong use of abcb rhyme
a great steady beat when read aloud due to consistent iambic meter and good use of enjambment to keep the thoughts flowing
the internal rhymes also add to the strong beat
What a wonderful self portrait, and so true to life, my upfront friend :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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strong use of abcb rhyme
a great steady beat when read aloud due to consistent iambic meter and good use of enjambment to keep the thoughts flowing
the internal rhymes also add to the strong beat
What a wonderful self portrait, and so true to life, my upfront friend :-) Brooke
Comment Written 22-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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Many thanks Brooke. Glad you like my steady beat and internal rhymes. I loved the meter in this and my horn tooting self portrait and reflection thank you immensely.
Hugs P
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Comment from Black_Oxygen
Well Done ~ Phillippa
This is a fun read. The internal and end rhymes are
nicely placed. The cadence is like carnival music.
The attached illustration is the perfect accent that
enhances the message. Thank You for your creation.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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Well Done ~ Phillippa
This is a fun read. The internal and end rhymes are
nicely placed. The cadence is like carnival music.
The attached illustration is the perfect accent that
enhances the message. Thank You for your creation.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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Lovely review thank you. Much appreciate your enjoyment of my poem
Cheers P
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Comment from Kiki12
Hey chickie, i've been wondering where you've been. so nice to see you and your witty verse. You always have such a smooth flow and perfect rhyme, it's a joy to read your verses. And i think this is a very nice snapshot of who you are in all your honest creativity. Lots of fun- and this is my favorite-
My bane and curse is metered verse
xx
Kiki
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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Hey chickie, i've been wondering where you've been. so nice to see you and your witty verse. You always have such a smooth flow and perfect rhyme, it's a joy to read your verses. And i think this is a very nice snapshot of who you are in all your honest creativity. Lots of fun- and this is my favorite-
My bane and curse is metered verse
xx
Kiki
Comment Written 22-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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Thanks KiKi, I appreciate your time stopping by. This IS the perfect snapshot of my abrasive/marshmallow personality.
Yes the old metered verse will haunt me forever more.
Hugs P
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Comment from Kingsland
This remind me of a limerick, as it kind of has that tempo in it. This was a well written poetic voice that says a lot about its writer. I enjoyed reading and responding to this excellent piece of poetic art... John
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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This remind me of a limerick, as it kind of has that tempo in it. This was a well written poetic voice that says a lot about its writer. I enjoyed reading and responding to this excellent piece of poetic art... John
Comment Written 22-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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Thanks very much Kingsland and glad you liked my limericky style horn toot about a loud mouth smart ass poetic voice.
Cheers P
Comment from ephraim crud, COS.
sorry, Phillippa, clean outta sixes.
an exceptional write, as always, and,
by 'eck, your rhythm is pukka!
a smart-ass write and a smart-ass read!
whoop-whoop! thank you for sharing.
warmly, xxx, eph and connie.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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sorry, Phillippa, clean outta sixes.
an exceptional write, as always, and,
by 'eck, your rhythm is pukka!
a smart-ass write and a smart-ass read!
whoop-whoop! thank you for sharing.
warmly, xxx, eph and connie.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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Thanks whoop whoop, much appreciate you stopping by and I still can't work out who the fuck is talking.
You better come clean soon...email me.
LOL
I'm confuckingfoosed.
Lub Pee
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okay honey, that one was eph :) and i have just read myself, cos would have missed it if i hadn't seen this reply. Love this my smart arse jester....... brilliant and as eph said, well deserving of a six. luv ya, Connie xx
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Shit! I thought so. There are subtle differences but on some of the writes I didn't have a clue who was talking.
Got totally befuddled. LOL
I call by soon once I feel a bit better...been feeling a little queasy lately...
Cheers P
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lol. okay, a little clue is all my writes are in a book called 'Sister Connie' plus a second book called 'A Joint Decision' which is a collaboration with eph
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lol. okay, a little clue is all my writes are in a book called 'Sister Connie' plus a second book called 'A Joint Decision' which is a collaboration with eph. Not sure if Eph will be flattered or insulted lol - i'm flattered though! Wish you better honey xx
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Ahah...I was onto that and then HE wrote something and then I didn't know whether you were Arthur or fucking Martha.
Well, not "fucking" Martha persay, but you know what I mean. LOL
Hugs Pee
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I feel like shit lately so please bear with me darlin'. LOL
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well, at least you are only 'feeling' like shit as opposed to one who is a shit :) xx
Comment from Glasstruth
A very happy-who-cares it's me attitude. The rhyming is just out of this world. Thought it would get to be hum-drum, but the liveliness and smooth flow kept it fresh. Love the ending line: "I'm just a smart-ass jester!" Smart-ass refreshing! Les
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A very happy-who-cares it's me attitude. The rhyming is just out of this world. Thought it would get to be hum-drum, but the liveliness and smooth flow kept it fresh. Love the ending line: "I'm just a smart-ass jester!" Smart-ass refreshing! Les
Comment Written 22-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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Wow Les, thanks so much and glad this was NOT humdrum...I always try and entertain my readers till the last hurrah. Much appreciate you sixing me up.
Hugs P
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Comment from despiser
Ooh da fuckin Bunny dwop a bomb lol.
Cheeky little devil aren't you? Never mind cocking the head like "what do you mean?"
Fuckin Bunnies.
This meter swings right through your wheelhouse darlin. Ne'er truer words spoken.
-DEE xx
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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Ooh da fuckin Bunny dwop a bomb lol.
Cheeky little devil aren't you? Never mind cocking the head like "what do you mean?"
Fuckin Bunnies.
This meter swings right through your wheelhouse darlin. Ne'er truer words spoken.
-DEE xx
Comment Written 22-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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Awwww fankyou my DEE
No cock of the head here *smirk* Glad you liked my wheel house horn tootin long eared galootin' jamboorie.
Hugs
da fuckin Bunny
===(:o-B) xxxxx
Comment from NicciFaye
Am smiling so hard...You know i read this...read the author notes....looked at the picture and said...that picture almost looks like her alter ego....yes...then the words that flowed, created beautifully truly says a lot...I really liked this poem...I can def say...real is better than fake anyday..
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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Am smiling so hard...You know i read this...read the author notes....looked at the picture and said...that picture almost looks like her alter ego....yes...then the words that flowed, created beautifully truly says a lot...I really liked this poem...I can def say...real is better than fake anyday..
Comment Written 22-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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LOL thanks so much, I appreciate your enjoyment of this piece. I couldn't be any other way.
Cheers P
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Comment from Titan Black
Lol! I like this poem a lot . "Don't try me,
Charm won't buy".
Real talk! And creative like no tomorrow. And
try to charm you? Tomorrow, we borrow for sorrow. And
I don't want get on your bad side. Lol! Seriously, like your
style of writing. You are truly a poetess. Keep writing.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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Lol! I like this poem a lot . "Don't try me,
Charm won't buy".
Real talk! And creative like no tomorrow. And
try to charm you? Tomorrow, we borrow for sorrow. And
I don't want get on your bad side. Lol! Seriously, like your
style of writing. You are truly a poetess. Keep writing.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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Thanks very much. I appreciate you stopping by.
Have a great day.
Cheers P
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No problem. And let me know what you think of my poetry. And fan me. Because networking works. Stay connected.
Comment from steevie
You never fail to please, Pee. Just reading one of your poems always makes me feel like writing one in response ... as in instantly! LOL
You have a fine command of the King's English and offer up such delightful witty repartee.
Its so funny that you wrote about a jester. I was the class clown in school for the first few grades, but I was not considered amusing any further by grade four. Ha.
Thanks for the fun ride, as always, you made me smile the way only you can ...
have a good one, sweetie
your buddy and pal
stevo
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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You never fail to please, Pee. Just reading one of your poems always makes me feel like writing one in response ... as in instantly! LOL
You have a fine command of the King's English and offer up such delightful witty repartee.
Its so funny that you wrote about a jester. I was the class clown in school for the first few grades, but I was not considered amusing any further by grade four. Ha.
Thanks for the fun ride, as always, you made me smile the way only you can ...
have a good one, sweetie
your buddy and pal
stevo
Comment Written 22-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2013
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Awww honey thanks. I think I fail to please in the review dept at the moment but I feel it all slipping away.
The business venture has taken over and also another direction...which could make me busier. I promise I drop you an email soon. I've been off colour for a week or more and family been crook too so hard to find energy for too much at all.
Loved your review, thanks a million
Hugs Pee
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I'm so sorry that I missed giving you a reply on this poem. Thank you for your message and your thoughts. They are always appreciated, my friend from down under ... under what, I don't know, but that's just what they say here so I go along with the crowd. LOL It's easier that way ... less thinking. They say of sled dogs that if you aren't the lead dog, you're scenery never changes, so I say to you, Pee, always be top dog.
smiles
hugs
stevo
