Love Like Crazy, More Than Gold!
a word of advice from You Know Who - 1550 words52 total reviews
Comment from MuseD
I'd go see the play!Though I'm still trying to figure out how to make for'ard into one syllable. I like that God uses OMG, I like your doorbell. I like your moment of confusion (or was it panic) when you thought Janus was Janis. I did have to read it twice, to follow completely - but that may have been that I got completely distracted by the mention of chocolate macadamia ice cream. Please, don't do that. Because now I need to go google it, and go find some. Nice work.
reply by the author on 19-May-2013
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I'd go see the play!Though I'm still trying to figure out how to make for'ard into one syllable. I like that God uses OMG, I like your doorbell. I like your moment of confusion (or was it panic) when you thought Janus was Janis. I did have to read it twice, to follow completely - but that may have been that I got completely distracted by the mention of chocolate macadamia ice cream. Please, don't do that. Because now I need to go google it, and go find some. Nice work.
Comment Written 19-May-2013
reply by the author on 19-May-2013
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Thx somuch Muse! I couldn't figure out how to write "forward" as one syllable apart from "fo'w'd" or "fawd" which would confuse 1. people and 2. especially Americans ... any suggestions?? "ford" would confuse them even more! he he he! And chocolate macadamia nut ice-cream is to be HIGHLY recommended by the way - Roselani brand - so next time you're in Hawaii, you'll know how to indulge, right?
:)Sharyn
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Hmmm, you're the poet! I cannot think of a way...forth? But that doesn't work does it? And next time I'm in Hawaii - I will try it - and you can believe I won't forget it. One does not forget such things. At least not one with their priorities right. ;)
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now I can see that "f'oward" is going to haunt my dreams - aaah, but ice-cream will haunt yours, dear, so - an even exchange!
:)S
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It didn't take away from the story, Visionary. I didn't even think of it until I read your comments at the end. You are correct about the ice-cream. I tried to substitute raspberry yogurt, but it just isn't working.
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no, I wasn't too worried dear! nope - it has to be DECADENT or it just won't work! :)))
Comment from emjaihammond
This was such a fun read. So very unusual and I thought even a bit informative. I would venture to guess you had a good time writing this one, and it was indeed entertaining to the reader as well. I love the set as explained. Very funny and well written.
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This was such a fun read. So very unusual and I thought even a bit informative. I would venture to guess you had a good time writing this one, and it was indeed entertaining to the reader as well. I love the set as explained. Very funny and well written.
Comment Written 19-May-2013
reply by the author on 19-May-2013
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So glad you enjoyed this one MJ - I over-detail my scripts because I know many people find scripts hard to read in just straight script format. So glad you enjoyed! :)Sharyn
Comment from Sararb
You really used your imagination on this one. It was really humorous. Your communication with God. I couldn't think of anything to enter here, You did A great job. Good luck in the contest! Sara :)
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You really used your imagination on this one. It was really humorous. Your communication with God. I couldn't think of anything to enter here, You did A great job. Good luck in the contest! Sara :)
Comment Written 19-May-2013
reply by the author on 19-May-2013
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oh good!! so glad you enjoyed this one too my dear! I had a lot of fun writing it! :)Sharyn
Comment from JM daSilva
I loved this because I am like Janus,too, only I don't see my former selves as me, but as another person that lives in me now, trapped in my mind, forever stuck in their time period, waiting to help me whenever they can with the wisdom they acquire by living their lives in a perpetual circle until I die. I am not an eighteen-year-old, but he lives in me and so does all my other decanus (ten-year-beings) who lived so intensely when they were in charge. They are still in charge, only not of this body. They are forever 0 to 10, 10 to 20, 20 to 30 and so on. My decanus will only die when the last decanus takes over my body. Thanks for sharing.
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I loved this because I am like Janus,too, only I don't see my former selves as me, but as another person that lives in me now, trapped in my mind, forever stuck in their time period, waiting to help me whenever they can with the wisdom they acquire by living their lives in a perpetual circle until I die. I am not an eighteen-year-old, but he lives in me and so does all my other decanus (ten-year-beings) who lived so intensely when they were in charge. They are still in charge, only not of this body. They are forever 0 to 10, 10 to 20, 20 to 30 and so on. My decanus will only die when the last decanus takes over my body. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 19-May-2013
reply by the author on 19-May-2013
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hey Joe - those parts of us are always there and can be accessed in meditation whenever you need guidance. Sometimes as an adult, we react FROM those parts of us, and have to go in and fix whatever it is that's bugging THEM so we can be the adult, yes? This one's dedicated to you, my dear!
:)The Royal We
ps: say your 'ed' PM - thx so much!
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Thanks a lot for the dedication, and you said it all. They are all there, and I like to talk to them whenever I can.
Comment from Robert Lee Brown
I don't know much about judging script, but I enjoyed the read and think that you are very creative to do this sort of write. Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the contest. Your friend, Bob
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I don't know much about judging script, but I enjoyed the read and think that you are very creative to do this sort of write. Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the contest. Your friend, Bob
Comment Written 19-May-2013
reply by the author on 19-May-2013
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Bless you, Bob - as always, dear! :)Sharyn
Comment from Gungalo
You certainly did fulfill the requirements of the contest. Girl if nothing else you have shown what it was like to be one of the elite in a time before time.
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You certainly did fulfill the requirements of the contest. Girl if nothing else you have shown what it was like to be one of the elite in a time before time.
Comment Written 19-May-2013
reply by the author on 19-May-2013
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what a lovely review Pam - thank you so much! :)S
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Smiling at you.
Comment from Opal H.
This is a very interesting and inspiring piece. I think we all keep reminding ourselves of the past and worrying about the future, no matter the age group. Nice positive message :)
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This is a very interesting and inspiring piece. I think we all keep reminding ourselves of the past and worrying about the future, no matter the age group. Nice positive message :)
Comment Written 19-May-2013
reply by the author on 19-May-2013
Bless you, Opal! :)
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes my friend I enjoyed this it is indeed very well written and very creative indeed I am no good at reviewing this type of writing but I must say I enjoyed well done regards Jill
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Yes my friend I enjoyed this it is indeed very well written and very creative indeed I am no good at reviewing this type of writing but I must say I enjoyed well done regards Jill
Comment Written 19-May-2013
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bless you jill! :)S
Comment from Norbanus
That surprising likeness to yourself
might just get this play off the shelf
Delightful how you shared the story
How Janus fits into Rome's glory
A two-faced god to bring them luck
provided they have needed pluck
but love like crazy, that's the way
to keep em happy every day
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That surprising likeness to yourself
might just get this play off the shelf
Delightful how you shared the story
How Janus fits into Rome's glory
A two-faced god to bring them luck
provided they have needed pluck
but love like crazy, that's the way
to keep em happy every day
Comment Written 19-May-2013
reply by the author on 19-May-2013
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oh your poetic reviews always make me chuckle so hard Nor, you clever devil you! :))))
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This was superb, Sharyn, made me stop and think, AND pinch some of my hubby's peanuts!! I think this is an excellent story for the contest, as you say, it meets all the requirements. Your story is actually one we really should follow, we are ony here once, why not enjoy it? Chocolates,
chips, cake, my mouth is dribbling again! Good luck in the contest, Sharyn, it's perfect! xsx Sandra
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This was superb, Sharyn, made me stop and think, AND pinch some of my hubby's peanuts!! I think this is an excellent story for the contest, as you say, it meets all the requirements. Your story is actually one we really should follow, we are ony here once, why not enjoy it? Chocolates,
chips, cake, my mouth is dribbling again! Good luck in the contest, Sharyn, it's perfect! xsx Sandra
Comment Written 19-May-2013
reply by the author on 19-May-2013
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Sandra, bless you for your wonderful SIX on this one! I'm delighted! If ever you're in Hawaii, I'll treat you to chocolate macadamiai nut ice-cream, Roselani brand! :)Sharyn
