Love Like Crazy, More Than Gold!
a word of advice from You Know Who - 1550 words52 total reviews
Comment from robina1978
I think you almost wrote this like a scrip which made the story part difficult to follow for me. I loved the poem bits though. Best wishes for the prompt. I am in it to with something completely different.
reply by the author on 20-May-2013
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I think you almost wrote this like a scrip which made the story part difficult to follow for me. I loved the poem bits though. Best wishes for the prompt. I am in it to with something completely different.
Comment Written 20-May-2013
reply by the author on 20-May-2013
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thx Ine - scripts can be challenging for some, I know. I must take a peek at yours! :)S
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welcome, Ine
Comment from God's Writer
You did an excellent way of weaving poem with prose. Maybe a dialogue/essay. What ever it may be I learned a lot from it and the history lesson in the author's notes.
reply by the author on 20-May-2013
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You did an excellent way of weaving poem with prose. Maybe a dialogue/essay. What ever it may be I learned a lot from it and the history lesson in the author's notes.
Comment Written 20-May-2013
reply by the author on 20-May-2013
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Thx so much Erick! :)Sharyn
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
A delightful and amusing adventure into mid-life and then forward and back. (As we do )
An impressive script and I feel you must have a very close relationship with story teller/God for you seem to have an identical twin's understanding of each other.lol.
reply by the author on 20-May-2013
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A delightful and amusing adventure into mid-life and then forward and back. (As we do )
An impressive script and I feel you must have a very close relationship with story teller/God for you seem to have an identical twin's understanding of each other.lol.
Comment Written 20-May-2013
reply by the author on 20-May-2013
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yes, the Storyteller and I have quite a personal relationship these days ... :)))
Sharyn
Comment from cvcopac
I enjoyed this clever little romp with the self--the monologue, and love the opening and closing verse. The story has all the trappings of poetry with its dynamics, plus script and prose. Thank you for the education on Janus; helps me to better understand the ex. I knew she was a natural. Kenny
reply by the author on 20-May-2013
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I enjoyed this clever little romp with the self--the monologue, and love the opening and closing verse. The story has all the trappings of poetry with its dynamics, plus script and prose. Thank you for the education on Janus; helps me to better understand the ex. I knew she was a natural. Kenny
Comment Written 20-May-2013
reply by the author on 20-May-2013
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aah you make me laugh Kenny! Thx very much for enjoying my Romanesque Dame Edna Big Mama romp dear! :))S
Comment from G.B. Smith
Hello Sharyn
I thought this was going to be stupid. HA, the joke was on my. It is clever, and above that a superb The letter: contest entry. I think you'll do very well in the contest
Bear
reply by the author on 20-May-2013
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Hello Sharyn
I thought this was going to be stupid. HA, the joke was on my. It is clever, and above that a superb The letter: contest entry. I think you'll do very well in the contest
Bear
Comment Written 19-May-2013
reply by the author on 20-May-2013
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Bless you Bear - would I write something STUPID??? Glad I didn't honey bunny! and I'm so glad you enjoyed it and a huge thank you for the lovely sixer!
big hugs
Sharyn
Comment from Charlene0513
To visionary1234,
This is a first for me as I have never reviewed a monologue.
But in some aspects I can relate to this as we are not to love ourselves more than God loves all the children of the worldYour making mention of Janus makes us realize that we cannot serve two Gods; thus arises the two-faced idol.
Hope my thoughts complimented your work.
Charlene
reply by the author on 20-May-2013
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To visionary1234,
This is a first for me as I have never reviewed a monologue.
But in some aspects I can relate to this as we are not to love ourselves more than God loves all the children of the worldYour making mention of Janus makes us realize that we cannot serve two Gods; thus arises the two-faced idol.
Hope my thoughts complimented your work.
Charlene
Comment Written 19-May-2013
reply by the author on 20-May-2013
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bless you Charlene! :)))Sharyn
Comment from Max Edon
I just loved this play. It was so vivid and interesting. I enjoyed the little songs she sang at the opening and ending. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-May-2013
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I just loved this play. It was so vivid and interesting. I enjoyed the little songs she sang at the opening and ending. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-May-2013
reply by the author on 20-May-2013
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thx Max! :)s
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You are welcome
Comment from Taffspride
I read this when I got up this morning, but was rushing to finish packing the car for our short vacation in the mountains.
Your script is well written, and puts your reader right there listening to you. It makes me wish I could be there when you perform it. It surely would be wonderful.
The triolets read so well aloud, and could stand alone too.
Great job Sharyn.
Thanks for sharing.
Iechyd da
Ann
reply by the author on 20-May-2013
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I read this when I got up this morning, but was rushing to finish packing the car for our short vacation in the mountains.
Your script is well written, and puts your reader right there listening to you. It makes me wish I could be there when you perform it. It surely would be wonderful.
The triolets read so well aloud, and could stand alone too.
Great job Sharyn.
Thanks for sharing.
Iechyd da
Ann
Comment Written 19-May-2013
reply by the author on 20-May-2013
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Bless you, Ann - I'm so glad you enjoyed the triolets as well - now I'm driving myself insane, trying to hum music for them! :)))
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Sharyn,
You my friend are a genius - when you pen your scripts I think you can capture readers that don't really have much to do with scripts. I read yours for they are clear and concise. They don't confuse me, professional quality both in penned skill and in topic.
Fabulous work this is a six - exceptional writing.
Well dammit you are at your darn quota of sixes - bloody stupid rule that is by the way.
Thanks for sharing this is amazing work.
Maureen
reply by the author on 19-May-2013
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Sharyn,
You my friend are a genius - when you pen your scripts I think you can capture readers that don't really have much to do with scripts. I read yours for they are clear and concise. They don't confuse me, professional quality both in penned skill and in topic.
Fabulous work this is a six - exceptional writing.
Well dammit you are at your darn quota of sixes - bloody stupid rule that is by the way.
Thanks for sharing this is amazing work.
Maureen
Comment Written 19-May-2013
reply by the author on 19-May-2013
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Blessings for your virtual sixer Maureen! I'm so glad you enjoyed this one. I had a blast writing it, as I haven't written scripts lately. Now I need to go hum music to someone and have them write it down for me! :)S
Comment from Schalk Jacobs
An excellent piece with which you manage to get a very profound and spiritual message across. Always look forward and let your belief take care of the rest. A unique entry into a contest. It is original and adheres to the criteria. also enjoyed the little bit of history affixed in your author's note. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-May-2013
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An excellent piece with which you manage to get a very profound and spiritual message across. Always look forward and let your belief take care of the rest. A unique entry into a contest. It is original and adheres to the criteria. also enjoyed the little bit of history affixed in your author's note. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-May-2013
reply by the author on 19-May-2013
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Bless you my dear - thx so much for reading & reviewing! :)S
