The Animal Doctor
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Comment from emjaihammond
I found reading this to be most enjoyable. Your writing is refreshing and I really like the story so far. These characters are believable and fun to get to know. I am happy to have stumbled onto your story. I truly enjoyed reading this as it begins to tell a very interesting tale.
reply by the author on 18-May-2013
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I found reading this to be most enjoyable. Your writing is refreshing and I really like the story so far. These characters are believable and fun to get to know. I am happy to have stumbled onto your story. I truly enjoyed reading this as it begins to tell a very interesting tale.
Comment Written 18-May-2013
reply by the author on 18-May-2013
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Thank you so much for stumbling by and reading my story. I'm writing chapter 2 now. I hope you'll like it.
Comment from Liberty Justice
Sad ending, but overall the writer portrays his characters as loving and endeared to animals. Shows a true dedication to protecting and caring for troubled, sick, and wounded animals.
Each character whispers of his own character through his conversations.
Liberty Jusice
reply by the author on 18-May-2013
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Sad ending, but overall the writer portrays his characters as loving and endeared to animals. Shows a true dedication to protecting and caring for troubled, sick, and wounded animals.
Each character whispers of his own character through his conversations.
Liberty Jusice
Comment Written 18-May-2013
reply by the author on 18-May-2013
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Wow, thank you Justice for this enlightening analysis. I really appreciate your time to read my story. I'm writing chapter 2 now.
Comment from dennis0530
I find this a good read waking up various emotions. Man-to-animal compassion is not much different from that between humans. A simple tale of ordinary people sharing their lives as animal lovers.
Yes, the spell-check missed the "d" when Nathan said, "Please to meet you Miss."
The appearance of this brown-eyed angel portends of some exhilarating expectations. Will the doctor be able to take care of his heart?
reply by the author on 17-May-2013
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I find this a good read waking up various emotions. Man-to-animal compassion is not much different from that between humans. A simple tale of ordinary people sharing their lives as animal lovers.
Yes, the spell-check missed the "d" when Nathan said, "Please to meet you Miss."
The appearance of this brown-eyed angel portends of some exhilarating expectations. Will the doctor be able to take care of his heart?
Comment Written 17-May-2013
reply by the author on 17-May-2013
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Thank you dennis. Me and 30 reviewers missed the 'd' LOL Thank you so much for catching it, my dear. My new favorite number is 31 thanks to you.
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Wow, is my eyesight that good?! Catching a missing "d" which you guys missed. Maybe its because I re-read it several times. I liked the simplicity and lightness of your piece.
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LOL Yep, you were the only one. And that reminds me, I forgot to change it. LOL
Comment from Max Edon
I enjoyed reading this chapter. It was very interesting and lively. The death of Fearsome Bill was told with a lot of grace and dignity.
reply by the author on 17-May-2013
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I enjoyed reading this chapter. It was very interesting and lively. The death of Fearsome Bill was told with a lot of grace and dignity.
Comment Written 17-May-2013
reply by the author on 17-May-2013
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Thank you Max. I really appreciate your review.
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You are welcome
Comment from misscookie
You had my attention from the first line to the last.
I love the movement of your story and there was not a dull moments.
thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-May-2013
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You had my attention from the first line to the last.
I love the movement of your story and there was not a dull moments.
thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 17-May-2013
reply by the author on 17-May-2013
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Thank you misscookie.
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Your very welcome. Have a nice week end.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
This I well written my friend I like the way you build the chapter and bring the chapter to its closing so smoothly well done I enjoyed regards Jill
reply by the author on 17-May-2013
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This I well written my friend I like the way you build the chapter and bring the chapter to its closing so smoothly well done I enjoyed regards Jill
Comment Written 17-May-2013
reply by the author on 17-May-2013
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Thank you Mrs Happy. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from vvaught512
Interesting start of a unique storyline. I don't think I've ever read a book about an animal doctor. I do have some suggestions. Work on showing, not telling. Add some more interaction with the heroine. You need something that will reach out and grab your reader.
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reply by the author on 17-May-2013
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Interesting start of a unique storyline. I don't think I've ever read a book about an animal doctor. I do have some suggestions. Work on showing, not telling. Add some more interaction with the heroine. You need something that will reach out and grab your reader.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 17-May-2013
reply by the author on 17-May-2013
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Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from wadamani
I found this to be a great and gripping way to opening up a book. Well done on created vivid characters and an interesting opening storyline.
reply by the author on 17-May-2013
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I found this to be a great and gripping way to opening up a book. Well done on created vivid characters and an interesting opening storyline.
Comment Written 17-May-2013
reply by the author on 17-May-2013
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Thank you so much.
Comment from alexgeorge
Wow! Now that's what I call a hearty breakfast: inch thick steak on an early morning. I want the address and phone of this Merald woman :-)
We've met Miss Nathan Daniels and judging by the picture accompanying this story, a whiff of love wafts over.
Shows great promise, Amahra,
Alex
reply by the author on 17-May-2013
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Wow! Now that's what I call a hearty breakfast: inch thick steak on an early morning. I want the address and phone of this Merald woman :-)
We've met Miss Nathan Daniels and judging by the picture accompanying this story, a whiff of love wafts over.
Shows great promise, Amahra,
Alex
Comment Written 17-May-2013
reply by the author on 17-May-2013
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There's no miss Daniels, but thanks for reviewing.
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I'm so sorry, Amahra.
I meant Margaret, of course! Nathan Daniels will hopefully become her amore,
;) Alex.
Comment from Sanku
I enjoyed the introductory chapter of this novel and found it very interesting .being an animal lover and a lover of village life, i loved reading it .And am looking forward to nathan ,The passionate.-all the best
reply by the author on 17-May-2013
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I enjoyed the introductory chapter of this novel and found it very interesting .being an animal lover and a lover of village life, i loved reading it .And am looking forward to nathan ,The passionate.-all the best
Comment Written 17-May-2013
reply by the author on 17-May-2013
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Thank you.
