Along the Jericho Road
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Comment from misscookie
Once again you capture my attention.
I found this chapter to be very interesting to read
I thought you did a great job with the conversation between the Father and that sharp tongue Debra
reply by the author on 13-May-2013
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Once again you capture my attention.
I found this chapter to be very interesting to read
I thought you did a great job with the conversation between the Father and that sharp tongue Debra
Comment Written 13-May-2013
reply by the author on 13-May-2013
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Thanks so much, misscookie. I really appreciate you taking time to read and review my chapter. Your support means a lot! Hugs, Bev
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You're very welcome. Until next time.
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You bet! :0)
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Take care!
Comment from Selina Stambi
I'm so glad I had a six for this.
Bev, you are so creative, my friend. I could picture the sleazy Debra and smiled as poor Father Brian fell right into her trap!
So very well done! Hugs and kisses xxx :)
Spags:
flavored coffees? (no apostrophe)
pet dander (sounds better than dandruff in connection with pets!)
more complicated (during/over) the last few years
goodbyes (no apostrophe)
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I'm so glad I had a six for this.
Bev, you are so creative, my friend. I could picture the sleazy Debra and smiled as poor Father Brian fell right into her trap!
So very well done! Hugs and kisses xxx :)
Spags:
flavored coffees? (no apostrophe)
pet dander (sounds better than dandruff in connection with pets!)
more complicated (during/over) the last few years
goodbyes (no apostrophe)
Comment Written 13-May-2013
reply by the author on 13-May-2013
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Hi, Sonali. Thank you, my friend, for such an awesome review. I'm humbled by your generosity. And I do appreciate your sharp eye for the spags. I like dander better, too! Hugs, Bev
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Any time, doll! You're my FS sandbox pal ... :)
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Love it - and you! xxxOO Bev
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:) :) !!!!!
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hehehehe
Comment from donkeyoatey
In a way, this reminds me of a Victorian drama, I think it is the wonderful descriptions..that makes the reader feel as if they are there, and not just reading, but living it. I think your addition of the dog, is simply super, and makes us instantly feel a connection. thank you for choosing my artwork. Donkeyoatey
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In a way, this reminds me of a Victorian drama, I think it is the wonderful descriptions..that makes the reader feel as if they are there, and not just reading, but living it. I think your addition of the dog, is simply super, and makes us instantly feel a connection. thank you for choosing my artwork. Donkeyoatey
Comment Written 13-May-2013
reply by the author on 13-May-2013
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Hi, D. Thanks so much for this gracious review. I really appreciate the supportive insights! Warm regards, Bev
Comment from JM daSilva
I think the woman is interesting. I can imagine how she can infuriate the priest. She made me laugh and at the same time. Good job making me feel all that.
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I think the woman is interesting. I can imagine how she can infuriate the priest. She made me laugh and at the same time. Good job making me feel all that.
Comment Written 13-May-2013
reply by the author on 13-May-2013
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Thanks so much, JM. I really appreciate your generous review! Bev
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It was a great pleasure.
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Comment from AprilShower
Debra is quite a character. It was funny how she fell inside when he finally got the door open. It was great how Father Brian controlled his anger. His dog had better manners then Debra. Well done, Bev.
I'm anxious to find out who is killing these people.
April
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Debra is quite a character. It was funny how she fell inside when he finally got the door open. It was great how Father Brian controlled his anger. His dog had better manners then Debra. Well done, Bev.
I'm anxious to find out who is killing these people.
April
Comment Written 13-May-2013
reply by the author on 13-May-2013
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Thanks so much, April. I really appreciate your generous review and encouragement. Hugs, Bev
Comment from c_lucas
A niece that every one would love to put in a coffin and bury alive. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
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A niece that every one would love to put in a coffin and bury alive. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 13-May-2013
reply by the author on 13-May-2013
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That sums it up beautifully, charlie. Thanks so much! Bev
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You're welcome, Bev. Charlie
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Comment from judiverse
Really enjoyed this. Darcy is indeed a piece of work, and you characterize her so well. She complains about everything, and she shows her rudeness to Father Brian several times during her visit. All of this after Father Brian is trying to be so sensitive and is thinking carefully about what to say, considering that Debra was brutally murdered. Darcy totally disregards her aunt's Catholic religion when it comes to planning the funeral. As Darcy predicts, the church will probably be full. Perhaps the killer will show up, just as Father Brian has been thinking. Excellent work. judi
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Really enjoyed this. Darcy is indeed a piece of work, and you characterize her so well. She complains about everything, and she shows her rudeness to Father Brian several times during her visit. All of this after Father Brian is trying to be so sensitive and is thinking carefully about what to say, considering that Debra was brutally murdered. Darcy totally disregards her aunt's Catholic religion when it comes to planning the funeral. As Darcy predicts, the church will probably be full. Perhaps the killer will show up, just as Father Brian has been thinking. Excellent work. judi
Comment Written 13-May-2013
reply by the author on 13-May-2013
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Judi, thank you so much for your careful attention to my chapter's details. You've summed it up beautifully! And thank you for the six star rating - I really appreciate your generosity. I'm very inspired by your lovely review! :0) Bev
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You're welcome. I always look forward to more. Charles Dickens's watchword was Make 'em laugh, make 'em cry, make 'em wait.
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I like that! Thanks, judi. :0) Bev
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You're welcome. Darcy was so inconsiderate in her plans for the funeral. judi
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, writingfundimension, you did an excellent job writing this chapter where darcy visits the priest and finagles her way into him paying for the luncheon after the mass. she's a piece of work
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this is very well written, writingfundimension, you did an excellent job writing this chapter where darcy visits the priest and finagles her way into him paying for the luncheon after the mass. she's a piece of work
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Comment Written 13-May-2013
reply by the author on 13-May-2013
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Yes, she is, sweet. Unfortunately, I've met a few people like her over the years LOL. Thanks much for the great review. Bev
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Hi Bev,
That Darcy is something else - I wanted to jump up an ring her bloody neck - then I remembered - just a story.
Great dialogue and also well penned sneakiness of Darcy.
No issues my end - smooth and well penned as always.
I didn't want the post to end.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
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Hi Bev,
That Darcy is something else - I wanted to jump up an ring her bloody neck - then I remembered - just a story.
Great dialogue and also well penned sneakiness of Darcy.
No issues my end - smooth and well penned as always.
I didn't want the post to end.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
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Comment Written 13-May-2013
reply by the author on 13-May-2013
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Maureen, thank you so much for this delightful and encouraging review. I sure appreciate you hanging in with this novel. And your insights are always very much appreciated. P.S. I hate Darcy too LOL. Hugs, Bev
Comment from barkingdog
I wanted to wring Darcy's neck by the time I finished reading this. She is a manipulative, bossy, insensitive, greedy, tactless... need I go on. I hate her. Poor Father Brian to have to deal with her.
Thank God he has Alex to lighten his day with a kiss and a cheerful tail wag.
Wonderful chapter. I may have nightmares about Darcy though.
LOL
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I wanted to wring Darcy's neck by the time I finished reading this. She is a manipulative, bossy, insensitive, greedy, tactless... need I go on. I hate her. Poor Father Brian to have to deal with her.
Thank God he has Alex to lighten his day with a kiss and a cheerful tail wag.
Wonderful chapter. I may have nightmares about Darcy though.
LOL
Comment Written 13-May-2013
reply by the author on 13-May-2013
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Ellen, thank you so much for this wonderfully generous and encouraging review. Alyx is the best, isn't he? I so appreciate your support, my friend.
Hugs, Bev
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He is great! Such a good companion. I liked your line about him being a cheap date... for doggie treats. LOL
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There's a dog bakery in town. If I had a dog, I'd be in there all the time. They have bisquits shaped like UPS guys LOL. XXX Bev
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How funny. UPS guy cookies. I wonder what the flavor is.
I love it!
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They're brown, so I can only guess!
