Occupational Alphabet
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Limericks PQR"A series of Limericks
25 total reviews
Comment from dogontherocks
MY, my, Steve you are such a treat to read. What can I say about your Limericks other than very creative and deliciously entertaining with a touch of blue. As they should be.
Thanks for sharing
Dave
reply by the author on 23-May-2013
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MY, my, Steve you are such a treat to read. What can I say about your Limericks other than very creative and deliciously entertaining with a touch of blue. As they should be.
Thanks for sharing
Dave
Comment Written 14-May-2013
reply by the author on 23-May-2013
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Thanks, Dave. More to come....
Steve
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
NEW ADDITION: All three have the unwanted commas this time. By now you know the rule and should go thru and edit all the affected lines. I had reviewed this earlier, but didn't mention the commas. Sometimes I just comment on the content and not the spag, but today I'm back in "teacher" mode. :)
OLD REVIEW:
Bravo! THese are terrific! I've just posted a poem on the guys of fanstory, and it's time to start over again for next time. I've added you for that round...Just need five more now. :)
reply by the author on 23-May-2013
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NEW ADDITION: All three have the unwanted commas this time. By now you know the rule and should go thru and edit all the affected lines. I had reviewed this earlier, but didn't mention the commas. Sometimes I just comment on the content and not the spag, but today I'm back in "teacher" mode. :)
OLD REVIEW:
Bravo! THese are terrific! I've just posted a poem on the guys of fanstory, and it's time to start over again for next time. I've added you for that round...Just need five more now. :)
Comment Written 14-May-2013
reply by the author on 23-May-2013
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Thanks, Phyllis.
Steve
Comment from Hollyhock
Very amusing and delightfully saucy. All three made me smile but I think I like the double-entendre of the "athletic supporter" best.
Good, sound limericks in rhyme and meter although the last line of "petite paramedic, Perdita" is perhaps just a little forced and stumbling.
Really entertaining and fun!
reply by the author on 23-May-2013
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Very amusing and delightfully saucy. All three made me smile but I think I like the double-entendre of the "athletic supporter" best.
Good, sound limericks in rhyme and meter although the last line of "petite paramedic, Perdita" is perhaps just a little forced and stumbling.
Really entertaining and fun!
Comment Written 14-May-2013
reply by the author on 23-May-2013
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Thanks! I am having fun with these, but struggling to keep them saucy AND within my own idea of decency AND original....
Steve
Comment from Jane Johnson
I have actually, to be honest, avoided this poem, because I didn't think the artwork you added was interesting enough to entice me. But, once again, I have been proven wrong. I actually got a kick out of it! Words flowed well and it was humorous. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-May-2013
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I have actually, to be honest, avoided this poem, because I didn't think the artwork you added was interesting enough to entice me. But, once again, I have been proven wrong. I actually got a kick out of it! Words flowed well and it was humorous. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-May-2013
reply by the author on 23-May-2013
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Thanks, Jane.
Steve
Comment from trevorletang
Methinks - She has the looks suited to her Perdita - scares me so to be involved , But when no one's looking, that's another story. Well-built, Well-equipped and equally well quipped!
reply by the author on 24-May-2013
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Methinks - She has the looks suited to her Perdita - scares me so to be involved , But when no one's looking, that's another story. Well-built, Well-equipped and equally well quipped!
Comment Written 12-May-2013
reply by the author on 24-May-2013
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Thank you!
Steve
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
All three limericks are nicely humorous with flesh of instant witty and sense of humour, three occupational events with three distinct spark of living in wonder and mystic activation, I liked summarily all. 22/125
reply by the author on 24-May-2013
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All three limericks are nicely humorous with flesh of instant witty and sense of humour, three occupational events with three distinct spark of living in wonder and mystic activation, I liked summarily all. 22/125
Comment Written 12-May-2013
reply by the author on 24-May-2013
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Thank you!
Steve
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
These limericks are just great!
Gave me some good chuckles. A very unique premise for limericks ..... Occupational Alphabet .... clever!
Well done!
bichonfrisegirl aka Connie
reply by the author on 24-May-2013
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These limericks are just great!
Gave me some good chuckles. A very unique premise for limericks ..... Occupational Alphabet .... clever!
Well done!
bichonfrisegirl aka Connie
Comment Written 12-May-2013
reply by the author on 24-May-2013
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Connie, thanks for the sixer!
Steve
Comment from Cornelius2000
There was a small gal named Perdita
Who had a unique means of care
But Quentin was such
He was really too much
She had to declare him unfair.
Loved your limericks. I know that they're the red-headed stepchild of poetry, but they're great fun. Nice job.
reply by the author on 24-May-2013
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There was a small gal named Perdita
Who had a unique means of care
But Quentin was such
He was really too much
She had to declare him unfair.
Loved your limericks. I know that they're the red-headed stepchild of poetry, but they're great fun. Nice job.
Comment Written 12-May-2013
reply by the author on 24-May-2013
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Thank you.
Steve
Comment from Gungalo
Oh yeah, they're funny. I'm trying to choose one of them as the one I like best. I think it would be the first one as it has a certain pzazz!
reply by the author on 24-May-2013
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Oh yeah, they're funny. I'm trying to choose one of them as the one I like best. I think it would be the first one as it has a certain pzazz!
Comment Written 12-May-2013
reply by the author on 24-May-2013
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Thank you, my dear!
Steve
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So smiling at you.
Comment from 4tun81
You have done a great job with the alliteration and the rhyming is excellent. This is really funny. Great job. Keep up the good work. Thanks for posting.
reply by the author on 24-May-2013
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You have done a great job with the alliteration and the rhyming is excellent. This is really funny. Great job. Keep up the good work. Thanks for posting.
Comment Written 12-May-2013
reply by the author on 24-May-2013
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Thank you.
Steve
