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Senryu (woman in wheelchair) 7

senryu 5/5/5

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Comment from me_tudor
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That was a short and sweet poem. It was definitely a true statement too. I thought it was pretty funny. People who don't have handicaps wouldn't even think of something like that. Great job!

 Comment Written 11-May-2013

Comment from FLutterodt
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Oh how true. I have never thought of that. When one is locked into a situation many things we take for granted become so apparent. A very goog senryu

 Comment Written 11-May-2013

Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Again, I am laughing. This is great. I hope you put these together in a book. I am sure many people's days would be brightened as they read.

 Comment Written 11-May-2013

Comment from Robert Lee Brown
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This is a funny one also. You keep coming up with good ones and I hope you continue. Thanks for sharing. Your friend, Bob

 Comment Written 10-May-2013

reply by the author on 10-May-2013
    Thank you. I have many more!!! Debbie
Comment from JM daSilva
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Hey, that's a great advantage of taking your chair everywhere. I just went to an event and had trouble finding a seat. I had to ask that question all the time.

 Comment Written 10-May-2013

reply by the author on 10-May-2013
    It does come in handy!!! Debbie
Comment from angelmagnet
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This is funny! I think between the two of us we could come up with hundreds of perks for using a wheelchair. It could be an ongoing list that celebrates having your own personal transportation. I'm glad that we are taking classes and exchanging ideas together. Smiles, Cindy

 Comment Written 10-May-2013

reply by the author on 10-May-2013
    Sound like fun although we both probabl ylike run, you in a city and me in a small town. Let me know ifyou wld likbbie
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
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Oh you've get this thing going...it will definitely bring a smile but also an awareness of what a wheelchair patient lives with. Great job. God loves you and I do too.. I see a book in the making.

 Comment Written 10-May-2013

reply by the author on 10-May-2013
    Thank you so very much. I am hoping to make a chapbook of these senryu, soon~Debbie
Comment from dmt1967
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This poem made me laugh I loved the picture where do you get them from I love the moving picture very well written thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 10-May-2013

reply by the author on 10-May-2013
    Thank you. Take care, my friend~Debbie
Comment from adewpearl
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Your poem is in excellent senryu format
I love the satiric humor in this situation - nobody can dispute your observation! LOL
good alliteration in woman in wheelchair :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 10-May-2013

reply by the author on 10-May-2013
    Thanks so very much, Brooke. I am really enjoying these~Debbie
Comment from Dawn Munro
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Hahahaha! Well that's certainly true, and very cute. You have made perfect use of the senryu form, in my opinion, Debbie - this is very witty and clever. Nicely done!

 Comment Written 10-May-2013

reply by the author on 10-May-2013
    Thanks Dawn. Glad you enjoyed it~Debbie