Amidst Nature's Spell
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Comment from mohiro
Captivating! Simply captivating! Your first stanza pulled me into your powerful literary vortex. I don't wish to extricate myself soon.
I saw myself memorizing the first stanza within minutes. You just cast a sweet spell on me. Your second stanza simply sing with sweet similes.
The green color of your text is simply reminiscent of the field, nature. I look forward to reading more of your poems. Thanks for writing this powerful, sparkling piece!
Kindest regards,
Mohiro.
reply by the author on 20-May-2013
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Captivating! Simply captivating! Your first stanza pulled me into your powerful literary vortex. I don't wish to extricate myself soon.
I saw myself memorizing the first stanza within minutes. You just cast a sweet spell on me. Your second stanza simply sing with sweet similes.
The green color of your text is simply reminiscent of the field, nature. I look forward to reading more of your poems. Thanks for writing this powerful, sparkling piece!
Kindest regards,
Mohiro.
Comment Written 20-May-2013
reply by the author on 20-May-2013
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Thank you mohiro, for your most enthusiastic and appreciative
review, and the extra star award. Sincerely appreciated, but
above all, I am happiest you enjoyed it so thoroughly; that
indeed is and added reward. Thanks too, for your generious
thoughts and compliments, and thoughtfulness in sharing.
Very best wishes to you always! Ronni
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your well-written, lovely poem inaginatively describes a nature/life lover enjoying a day--even a dance--with the lovelies of nature. Very good
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Your well-written, lovely poem inaginatively describes a nature/life lover enjoying a day--even a dance--with the lovelies of nature. Very good
Comment Written 06-May-2013
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Thank you dear Janice, for your appreciative thoughts and
comments, and very grateful for the extra star... Hope
many of your days are wondrous too...enjoy...
Best wishes,...Ronni
Comment from Joan E.
You established the jubilant mood and glorious scene quickly and sustained it through your three stanzas. I was transported particularly by your use of personification in such examples as "flirting breeze" and "pearl kissed by rainbow's hue". Hugs- Joan
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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You established the jubilant mood and glorious scene quickly and sustained it through your three stanzas. I was transported particularly by your use of personification in such examples as "flirting breeze" and "pearl kissed by rainbow's hue". Hugs- Joan
Comment Written 05-May-2013
reply by the author on 06-May-2013
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Thanks dear Joan, for your appreciative thoughts and
comments. You always 'transport' me to a new joy
and brighter sunshine with your visit and gracious
sharing. Hugs galore, Ronni
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May we keep transporting one another and enjoying the sunshine! Hugs and smiles- Joan
Comment from Louise Michelle
What a joyous, uplifting poem. You use your words so skillfully. There are so many lines that I loved, but to name a couple: silvery mist of lingering dew and pirouetting butterflies. Nicely done, Ronni.
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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What a joyous, uplifting poem. You use your words so skillfully. There are so many lines that I loved, but to name a couple: silvery mist of lingering dew and pirouetting butterflies. Nicely done, Ronni.
Comment Written 05-May-2013
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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Thank you friend, so happy you enjoyed and shared your
insightful and supportive thoughts and comments. Hope
to see more of your posts too...Love, Ronni
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I usually post only two or three times a month, but thank you for your kind words.
Comment from Jade Lawson
Hi, Ronnie this is a very well written poem with fantastic elements such as happiness, joy, freedom and then it has a great imagery, I could feel the freshness, the nature and everything surrounding it. You did a fantastic job, really.
Each stanza has such a smooth flow we just can't help and get involved by your smooth and well chosen words. The enjambment just adds perfection to this poem and great artwork choice.
I also love the alliteration you used in the last line.
Loved it.
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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Hi, Ronnie this is a very well written poem with fantastic elements such as happiness, joy, freedom and then it has a great imagery, I could feel the freshness, the nature and everything surrounding it. You did a fantastic job, really.
Each stanza has such a smooth flow we just can't help and get involved by your smooth and well chosen words. The enjambment just adds perfection to this poem and great artwork choice.
I also love the alliteration you used in the last line.
Loved it.
Comment Written 05-May-2013
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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Thank you dear Angel, for your most enthusiastic and supportive
appreciation of this poem! Sincerely appreciated, happiest
reward is your most complimentary thoughts aand comments
so graciously shared. Very best wishes always, Ronni
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You are welcome, I always try to review the best I can. I am happy you liked my review.
Comment from NicciFaye
So lovely and elegant. The picture you paint with these words are peaceful, calming almost like the summer breeze flowing through. Lovely artwork creative write. God bless
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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So lovely and elegant. The picture you paint with these words are peaceful, calming almost like the summer breeze flowing through. Lovely artwork creative write. God bless
Comment Written 05-May-2013
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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Thank you for your most appreciative and supportive review,
sincerely appreciated. Happiest you enjoyed, best reward along
with your kind rating. Take care, and may God bless you with
many truly wondrous days! Ronni
Comment from misscookie
I love the artwork you posted to go with your lovely poem
You will never know how much those cheerful words mean to me right now.
I just wrote a piece for "We will survived" and it brought back sad memory. After writing it I'm not sure I will post it or write something different. Thanks for changing my mood.
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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I love the artwork you posted to go with your lovely poem
You will never know how much those cheerful words mean to me right now.
I just wrote a piece for "We will survived" and it brought back sad memory. After writing it I'm not sure I will post it or write something different. Thanks for changing my mood.
Comment Written 05-May-2013
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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Thank you Sweetie, for your most endearing thoughts and
comments. I am so very pleased this was an especially
meaningful presentation for you; and gave you deeper
thoughts and decisions for your own postings.
God Bless you ....Love always, Ronni
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You're very welcome.
Until next time.
Comment from GWinterwin
Very good poem here young lady. Yes nature is so beautiful and can certainly that is under a spell. It's beauty mystifies us and we are in a cocoon of nature bliss. Very good poem, thank you for sharing, God bless always.
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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Very good poem here young lady. Yes nature is so beautiful and can certainly that is under a spell. It's beauty mystifies us and we are in a cocoon of nature bliss. Very good poem, thank you for sharing, God bless always.
Comment Written 05-May-2013
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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My pleasure to share this poem, and likewise an added joy
your most apppreciative and supportive thoughts and comments
have brought me! Your gracious thoughtfulness and sharing
most touching indeed. God Bless you too...and hope you
have many jub8ilant days!
Comment from reconciled
WOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooooooooooooeeeeeewwwwwwwwwww....O...its over....shoot sorry... Wow Ronni I love this place its as beautiful as a full moon on the bright face of wonderful. Amen......a most appealing prayer emptied in poetic majesty through psalm calming. Very impressive....I waited...but...got no gold this time...and so, with head held low.... I bid you farewell... love you Michael
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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WOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooooooooooooeeeeeewwwwwwwwwww....O...its over....shoot sorry... Wow Ronni I love this place its as beautiful as a full moon on the bright face of wonderful. Amen......a most appealing prayer emptied in poetic majesty through psalm calming. Very impressive....I waited...but...got no gold this time...and so, with head held low.... I bid you farewell... love you Michael
Comment Written 05-May-2013
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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Well hello Awesome! Puzzled by some of your cryptic notes,
you are as mysterious as ever. Nonetheless, thank you for
appreciating this presentation and sharing your most complimentary thoughts and comments! Keep smiling and
writing!!! Take care of you...smile....loveRonni
Comment from DBastian
Ronni ... you have such a happy way about you and your happiness comes across in a lovely manner with your poems. Personally, I like the ending about thanking God for nature. And, that says great things about you and your source of happiness ...and this poem. Great presentation, lovely messages, and a very enchanting poem
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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Ronni ... you have such a happy way about you and your happiness comes across in a lovely manner with your poems. Personally, I like the ending about thanking God for nature. And, that says great things about you and your source of happiness ...and this poem. Great presentation, lovely messages, and a very enchanting poem
Comment Written 05-May-2013
reply by the author on 05-May-2013
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Thank you Dave, for your affirming and appreciative thoughts
and comments. Once again your perceptions are right on. I
am basically an upbeat happy person, and pleased to note it
permeated through in this poem; and my source of happiness.
Most grateful for your kind and supportive thoughts and
comments. Your visit, always an added delight. Wishing
you many wondrous days with sushine in your heart and a
song smiling within, wherever you go!
Very best wishes always, Ronni
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Thanks, I love sunshine!
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And sunshine loves you too...a wining
combination for sure! Keep that smiling
song within always humming too..:)
Have a terrific with lots of joyous sun!
Ronni
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Hmmm ... not sure if you purposely said "wining" or meant "winning" ... as far as I am concerned it is a winning situation when combined with wine!
Thanks for the insights!
Dave
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IDID MEAN WINNING...SORRY...MY GOOF UP...HOW
EMBARASSING...
Again..sorry for typo...Thanks for pointing it out... Wine great combination too.
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:)
