Steve's Story-Poems
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Comment from jppoet
C O N G R A T U L A T I O N S! AN EXCELLENT AND HUMOROUS POEM, ARTFULLY CRAFTED WITH SILKY RHYMES AND GRACEUL METRICAL DANCES. SUPERB FROM START TO END...JP
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C O N G R A T U L A T I O N S! AN EXCELLENT AND HUMOROUS POEM, ARTFULLY CRAFTED WITH SILKY RHYMES AND GRACEUL METRICAL DANCES. SUPERB FROM START TO END...JP
Comment Written 02-May-2013
reply by the author on 04-May-2013
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Thanks, JP!
Steve
Comment from jandeck
This was a very entertaining and well written poem. I've always heard that goats were trouble. Good luck with the goats and the contest.
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This was a very entertaining and well written poem. I've always heard that goats were trouble. Good luck with the goats and the contest.
Comment Written 02-May-2013
reply by the author on 04-May-2013
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Thank you so much.
Steve
Comment from angelmagnet
great story inside the poem.
Leaving me to wonder.
What on earth were you thinking.
Buying goats to put your roses asunder.
I love this story and I've loved most of the entries that I have read from this contest. You are so humorous about your plight, that I can't help but think that a solution must be closer than anyone could ponder.
good luck in the contest
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great story inside the poem.
Leaving me to wonder.
What on earth were you thinking.
Buying goats to put your roses asunder.
I love this story and I've loved most of the entries that I have read from this contest. You are so humorous about your plight, that I can't help but think that a solution must be closer than anyone could ponder.
good luck in the contest
Comment Written 02-May-2013
reply by the author on 04-May-2013
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Thank you.
Steve
Comment from Flamingbush
This poem is ingenious, and I so enjoy the rhymes. Funny but not funny - I do agree!
a pair of horned Houdinis, you might even call them genies -ha ha!
munching on the things they didn't ought (didn't exactly do as they were taught, huh?)
like a magnet to their noses... the most expensive roses: whoops!
You mention a perimeter with landlines, but we know that's not enough to keep them from eating what's on the other side of the fence...
The author notes are much appreciated and give me a glimpse into where you got some of this fantastic creativity.
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This poem is ingenious, and I so enjoy the rhymes. Funny but not funny - I do agree!
a pair of horned Houdinis, you might even call them genies -ha ha!
munching on the things they didn't ought (didn't exactly do as they were taught, huh?)
like a magnet to their noses... the most expensive roses: whoops!
You mention a perimeter with landlines, but we know that's not enough to keep them from eating what's on the other side of the fence...
The author notes are much appreciated and give me a glimpse into where you got some of this fantastic creativity.
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Comment Written 02-May-2013
reply by the author on 04-May-2013
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Thank you - glad you enjoyed.
Steve
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You're welcome. Great writing, keep it up.
Comment from L. Sherman
An absolutely adorable poem with great rhyme and rhythm and cadence. Very smooth, just rolls off the tongue. As an owner of 3 cats, currently, I can at least relate to how wily and mischievous our four-legged fiends... er, friends can be. Also, the historical insights really gave this extra 'oomph' - dunno how you quantify that, but hey! I loved it!
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An absolutely adorable poem with great rhyme and rhythm and cadence. Very smooth, just rolls off the tongue. As an owner of 3 cats, currently, I can at least relate to how wily and mischievous our four-legged fiends... er, friends can be. Also, the historical insights really gave this extra 'oomph' - dunno how you quantify that, but hey! I loved it!
Comment Written 02-May-2013
reply by the author on 04-May-2013
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Thanks so much for the review and the six stars.
We have cats, dogs and chickens as well as goats - all have their own little quirks.
Steve
Comment from dmt1967
This reminded me of the story the Billy goat gruff more than the great escape but that's just me very well written good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
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This reminded me of the story the Billy goat gruff more than the great escape but that's just me very well written good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
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Comment Written 02-May-2013
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Thank you!
Steve
