Inanimate
Life lived in slow Motion2 total reviews
Comment from Jina Sarma
Nice 5-7-5 poem. In the contest you are a strong competitor. Write more. Think more. Use of good language. All the best. Just outstanding effort.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Nice 5-7-5 poem. In the contest you are a strong competitor. Write more. Think more. Use of good language. All the best. Just outstanding effort.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Wow, thank you so much for the compliments. I didn't think anyone would actually read this. Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from DthomasNY
Good job at portraying the stillness we fall into at times, especially in so few words. Some go through the inanimate periods more than others, i think i'm one them. Good luck in the contest.
Dom.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Good job at portraying the stillness we fall into at times, especially in so few words. Some go through the inanimate periods more than others, i think i'm one them. Good luck in the contest.
Dom.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2013
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Thanks so much Dom. I appreciate the compliments. To be honest, I didn't think anyone was actually going to read it and then, I had to title the haiku. I don't think Haiku have titles, but it's a new experience. And my first time writing one.
