Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

This is a beautiful, romantic poem. I guess you have to feel that way about someone to be able to write about it so wonderfully which is why I can't. Lol.

 Comment Written 16-May-2005

Comment from ladykay

Excellent

Hi Pili...

The light that shines and tells you that he is the one for you...Hmmm...

You have the style for these poems and a God-diven gift with the writing of them...even if I wanted to...I would not be able to fault you.

This one stands equally good.

ladykay

 Comment Written 16-May-2005

Comment from Lainee

Excellent

Pili this is beautiful my friend. The imagery and flow of thoughts is sensual and soft and a pleasure from beginning to end.

that my soul fly ...fly's/flies...needs to be plural...
with yours

Goodluck with this,
Lainee :O)

 Comment Written 16-May-2005

Comment from Moonchild28

Excellent

This poem is so romantic and very sensual. The imagery is fantastic. Love the way you expressed the passion in each verse. It is superbly written and the flow very smooth.

 Comment Written 16-May-2005

Comment from Bryana

Excellent

Dear friend, you get more and more romantic
by the day. This poem is awesome. It takes
you to unknown romantic places full of love,
delight, sublime passion, breathing together
the warm air of intimacy.
Excellent imagery.

Un abrazo

 Comment Written 16-May-2005

Comment from sengwriter

Excellent

Bravo! Your song of fantasy has that force to make your desired soul dancing with glees and you two have made your existence an omnipresence ignoring all the time and place barrier. A powerful display of your pure soul which indulge your passion and lust with every positive reasoning. You are so pure everytime you express now a days that poem reaches a sublime height that blesses the readers with joy of simplicity- may it be a romantic one or anything of other world. Thanks for keeping your flow everytime you come here with your creations.

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Gautam.

 Comment Written 16-May-2005

Comment from DriftingStar

Excellent

I like the way that you write. It's very natural and true...If that makes any sense. I've always enjoyed reading your writting even though sometimes i didn't review them.

 Comment Written 16-May-2005

Comment from 96744mom

Excellent

very suttle, loved each verse, loved each word. i believe you are a very amusing and great poet who is blessed with many hidden talents. i liked the order your verses are written, they are so humble at the heart when reading. i would not change anything about it. keep up the great work.

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 Comment Written 16-May-2005