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5-7-5 about observing and being observed
2 total reviews
Comment from
Gungalo
Concealed among trees
She admires her lover's
Bold bright red plumage
What a beautiful write about these birds Mark. You fit it into a 5/7/5 perfectly.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2013
Thank you for your review. The 5/7/5 format offers a challenge but also a great way to look at the natural world.
Comment from
Glasstruth
Boy, she's got her best colors showing off. Red plumage is the way to go. Actually, it's just right for this time of the season. Thanks for sharing. Les
Comment Written 24-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2013
Thank you for your review.
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