Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

I like this black and white love poem. Great descriptions that start out slowly then builds up -as the stars burst and ting - nice one Allison. Good luck in the contest, its a lovely read.
Many thanks for the compliment of becoming a fan.
cheers

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2016

Your welcome! Thank you so much for the review, I really appreciate it!

Comment from RoostyNester

Excellent

I liked your poem on passionate love. It was very well done in verse and words. It created a mood and sent a message to the reader. Very well done.

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2016

Thank you for such a nice review!

Comment from the shining star

Excellent

i gave this poem a five star as i think it shows the important of the bonds of love. A bond is more powerful than the whole world when two people bond and become one they see themselves in a different world altogether and all troubles are forgotten

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2016

Thank you for the review, I really appreciate it!

reply by the shining star on 21-Aug-2016

you are welcome

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

Sounds like a Baptist preacher. Sun goes dark, moon turns to blood, stars fall. Just kidding to fatten my review. This looks excellent and to prompt in my opinion.

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2016

Thank you for the review!

Comment from rtobaygo

Excellent

Good afternoon, Allison

You've described the initial infatuation of two people falling in love when nothing else seems to matter except each other.

Enjoyed.

Take care and stay safe,

Ray

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2016

Thank you so much for the review!

Comment from Bollie

Excellent

Wow!!! You may be aware that I write a lot of love poems and this poem of yours is easily as good, if not better, then anything that I've written. This is a really beautiful poem with great rhyming that's unforced and a really consistent syllable count. Really nice job, keep up the good work. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2016

Thank you for such a nice compliment and review!

reply by Bollie on 20-Aug-2016

You're very welcome, Allison. Have a wonderful night.

reply by Anonymous Member on 20-Aug-2016

You're very welcome, Allison. Have a wonderful night.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Good job, Allison. It's a lovely free verse. I like free verse and haiku best. I don't do rhyme if I don't have to. :) I think you will do just fine with your entry for the love poem contest.
gypsy

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2016

Thank you so much for your review!

Comment from jlsavell

Excellent

Allison78, wow, this is a beautiful poem about passion and the melding of two hearts. Fortunate indeed is the one who finds their one. Fortunate indeed. It's actually incredible and all the hurt one has ever experienced dissipates when two are on the same ethereal plane. Beautiful work Allison. Jlsavell

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2016

Thank you so very much for such a flattering review!

Comment from reconciled

Excellent

and "ting"...bursting....-smile-
very clever....I loved you're poem of two come one...night special. I would give this gold...but I was robbed. love Michael

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2016

It's the thought that counts! Thank you so much for the review!

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

This is a great love poem full of imagery. I like the color scheme & the artwork. You expressed your feelings well--2 people oblivious to the world as they have eyes only for each other.

Good job & thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2016

Thank you so much for the review!