Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

town like Baltimore harbor the ghosts of the past and hope for the future it is hard to explain to most people but if you come from a big town you can see where I am coming from. you have the good and bad in all towns more so in a lot we are proud to boast about

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 Comment Written 13-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013

Well Baltimore has a lot of bad people and problems, but I have to walk those streets everyday and wanted to bring the humanity behind it all that one can experience. In trying to deal with those problems, I was offhandedly labeled a racist by the mayor who is a black woman and boy have I had fun with that.

I enjoyed this review and thank you for it. Mike

reply by country ranch writer on 13-Apr-2013

welcome and so she may say it but does she really think that down deep or say it to get the public's attention and sympathy.

Comment from arsinBW

Good

Pretty good, flowed fairly well. I felt it was a little long but I also tend to like shorter poems. All in all good though.

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 Comment Written 13-Apr-2013

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reply by the author on 13-Apr-2013

Hey I write these poems and believe me, always try to make them as short as possible, while conveying what I want. I had a little form fun with this as well. I thank you for your compliments and this review. Mike