tanka (be original)
what kind of green for our future?31 total reviews
Comment from Deborah Marie
I surely do. I got the Titanic part just from your well used photo to do with your well penned poem. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing, Deb
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2013
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I surely do. I got the Titanic part just from your well used photo to do with your well penned poem. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing, Deb
Comment Written 15-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2013
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Bless you Deb - how's your weight loss/ svelte new figure going dear? :)S
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I saw a "short" Christmas video on my hubby's photo and boy am I surprised how many pounds I've dropped and how I look and feel today. Thanks for asking, Deb PS Your poem is lovely...
Comment from Selina Stambi
I'm guilty of a holidy pi., in this pose - now I'm squirming!
You manage to put your characteristic energy and life even into a tanka, don't you??
Good luck in the contest, Sharyn!
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2013
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I'm guilty of a holidy pi., in this pose - now I'm squirming!
You manage to put your characteristic energy and life even into a tanka, don't you??
Good luck in the contest, Sharyn!
Comment Written 15-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2013
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well, tanka is so damned boring, isn't it? he he he??? :)S
Comment from Patti R.
This is just TOO funny, Sharyn! Serves them (her) right for being so Hollywood! I haven't seen the movie but saw enough hype that I recognize the pose.
blue-grey needs more green like an older woman would prefer brighter shades of eyeshadow, the greens and peacock blues of the seventies and sixties would do nicely!
It is high time for originality of thought - better ideas, new ideas, not the same old same old - loved this one.
P.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2013
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This is just TOO funny, Sharyn! Serves them (her) right for being so Hollywood! I haven't seen the movie but saw enough hype that I recognize the pose.
blue-grey needs more green like an older woman would prefer brighter shades of eyeshadow, the greens and peacock blues of the seventies and sixties would do nicely!
It is high time for originality of thought - better ideas, new ideas, not the same old same old - loved this one.
P.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2013
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Thx Patti! :)))S
Comment from OLA THOMAS
What a beautiful picture and a wonderful subject! Double entendres A perfect one at that. Good campein for our global protection, Let green flourish everywhere. I enjoyed this.I am still hold up in Nigeria, just pray for me.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2013
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What a beautiful picture and a wonderful subject! Double entendres A perfect one at that. Good campein for our global protection, Let green flourish everywhere. I enjoyed this.I am still hold up in Nigeria, just pray for me.
ola thomas
Comment Written 15-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2013
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Thx so much Ola! How much longer do you need to be back in Nigeria for my dear? I'm sorry to hear that - what's going on?
Best wishes
Sharyn
Comment from vkmack
Well, we all need to do that, don't we? Love the message here, and you've created a very original tanka. The artwork made me snort with laughter, especially coupled with the Titanic reference. Very clever. Good luck in the contest, my very original friend!
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2013
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Well, we all need to do that, don't we? Love the message here, and you've created a very original tanka. The artwork made me snort with laughter, especially coupled with the Titanic reference. Very clever. Good luck in the contest, my very original friend!
Comment Written 14-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2013
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thx vk - who could resist that picture? I certainly couldn't! :)S
Comment from Robert Lee Brown
All original; the picture, the presentation, and thee poem. A very good contest entry. This is very creative and expressive. I enjoyed it from first glance to the green. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest. Your friend, Bob
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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All original; the picture, the presentation, and thee poem. A very good contest entry. This is very creative and expressive. I enjoyed it from first glance to the green. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest. Your friend, Bob
Comment Written 14-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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Bless you Bob - thanks so much my dear! :)Sharyn
Comment from Spitfire
Not sure about the double entendre. Are you saying the Titanic story if redone should be on land? With global warming, who knows? Love the picture. Wonder if it was done with photoshop?
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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Not sure about the double entendre. Are you saying the Titanic story if redone should be on land? With global warming, who knows? Love the picture. Wonder if it was done with photoshop?
Comment Written 14-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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great piccy, isn't it? I get so tired of derivative movies and writes, and I'm also tired of watching the world do the same old crappy stuff re the environment - we need new ideas, not the same crap over and over again which we know don't work. :)
Comment from Maureen's Pen
OMG Sharyn that is the most hilarious picture ever and your work is also packs a punch bit of humor.
Well down and you had me laughing so I think it's great.
Thanks for sharing it and good luck.
Maureen
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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OMG Sharyn that is the most hilarious picture ever and your work is also packs a punch bit of humor.
Well down and you had me laughing so I think it's great.
Thanks for sharing it and good luck.
Maureen
Comment Written 14-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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thx Maureen - I'm afraid I can't take tanka too seriously! and who could resist this pic??? :)S
Comment from Sasha
I love this. What a marvelous poem and I can see why you could not resist the photograph. Great work with this one and I wish you all the best in the contest too.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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I love this. What a marvelous poem and I can see why you could not resist the photograph. Great work with this one and I wish you all the best in the contest too.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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thx so much my dear! :)S
Comment from God's Writer
A wonderful and all too true poem. Another poem I should read everyday. I have had such a treat today by reading many uplifting poems. Thank you for yours.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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A wonderful and all too true poem. Another poem I should read everyday. I have had such a treat today by reading many uplifting poems. Thank you for yours.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2013
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Blessings Eric! :)Sharyn
