Along the Jericho Road
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Conze Moon"Murder Mystery
49 total reviews
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Hi Bev, first let me say ...You scared the heck out of me with that skull in the photo, I was looking closer too since I couldn't figure out what it was - then bam! Skull!! Yikes!!
Ok exceptional writing again Bev. This is a powerhouse of a work, not only in the emotion, but also in the sense of the development within the story. Your characters dialogue and action was amazing and had me dying (oops not quite) to keep reading - then it ended.
Thanks for sharing and scaring me half to death.
Maureen
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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Hi Bev, first let me say ...You scared the heck out of me with that skull in the photo, I was looking closer too since I couldn't figure out what it was - then bam! Skull!! Yikes!!
Ok exceptional writing again Bev. This is a powerhouse of a work, not only in the emotion, but also in the sense of the development within the story. Your characters dialogue and action was amazing and had me dying (oops not quite) to keep reading - then it ended.
Thanks for sharing and scaring me half to death.
Maureen
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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I'm so sorry, Maureen. I did kind of hope you wouldn't look at the picture too closely! I so very much appreciate your wonderful review. Your words mean so much to me. Thanks for caring to keep up with my story and for your very generous rating. I'm honored, my lovely friend. Hugs, Bev
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It was a beauty beginning to end.:)
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So sweet you are, lovely Maureen. XoXoX
Comment from jppoet
Another good chapter, excellent story progression, credible dialague and with lingering suspenseful drama. good literature.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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Another good chapter, excellent story progression, credible dialague and with lingering suspenseful drama. good literature.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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Hi, jp. Thanks for the great review... your taking to read means a lot to me. Much appreciate it, my friend. Hugs, Bev
Comment from God's Writer
Very well written story my friend. So deep are your feelings and motions run. like cold blood returning to a warm heart. You kept my interest the whole way though. I have several nicely promoted that I would liked your opinion.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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Very well written story my friend. So deep are your feelings and motions run. like cold blood returning to a warm heart. You kept my interest the whole way though. I have several nicely promoted that I would liked your opinion.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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Thank you so much, Erick! I appreciate your kind words of support and taking the time to read. I will be glad to reciprocate! Warmest regards, Bev
Comment from mizzkris20
I sure hope I come across the next chapter. I want to read it as it unfolds. This is great writing. One day I wish to be as talented. Great story
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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I sure hope I come across the next chapter. I want to read it as it unfolds. This is great writing. One day I wish to be as talented. Great story
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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Thank you so much, mizzkriss. What a gracious and generous review. I really appreciate you stopping by to read my chapter. Warmest regards, Bev
Comment from Cumbrianlass
What can I say? Another remarkable post - long overdue, my friend! The way you write the interaction between your characters is nothing short of professional, and absolutely spot on with regards to the atmosphere and the circumstances of the situation.
You put the reader right there - hearing, seeing, smelling.
I really do like Jana. You have perfectly encapsulated an aboriginal women in what is a white man's world. I get that she's straddling two cultures, and I just love how you show that.
Excellent post, as always.
Love and hugs,
Av
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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What can I say? Another remarkable post - long overdue, my friend! The way you write the interaction between your characters is nothing short of professional, and absolutely spot on with regards to the atmosphere and the circumstances of the situation.
You put the reader right there - hearing, seeing, smelling.
I really do like Jana. You have perfectly encapsulated an aboriginal women in what is a white man's world. I get that she's straddling two cultures, and I just love how you show that.
Excellent post, as always.
Love and hugs,
Av
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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Thank you so much, Av. I wish I could write faster, I really do LOL. I'm thrilled you liked my chapter and, especially, your wonderful insights into Jana's character. What started out as a man's story has turned into Jana's story in some ways. But I think you know how how that happens. Appreciate your generosity and encouragement so much, Av. Hugs, Bev
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Jana said so herself - she is difficult.
A gruesome scene you painted in this part,
Bev - an impressive write.
Have at it."?? a look??
nixed - a new word for me
You're the best, my friend.
Margaret
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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Jana said so herself - she is difficult.
A gruesome scene you painted in this part,
Bev - an impressive write.
Have at it."?? a look??
nixed - a new word for me
You're the best, my friend.
Margaret
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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Margaret, thank you so very much for this very generous and encouraging review. And I appreciate your suggestion for tightening the write. Your words are like gold, my friend, as I so admire your descriptive skills. And the stars are beautiful as well. Warmest regards, Bev
Comment from Adri7enne
Good chapter, Bev. I guess there are probably dozens of names for the moon in the Sioux language. Such a fascinating culture.
I enjoyed the further insights into your characters. Doctor Bloomquist is a bully, Jana is still a sensitive woman, and Rick - well, I think he's eventually going to make a move on Jana. Yea!! I want to be there for that. LOL!
Nice reading, girl. I folowed right along. Interesting activiities going on "Along the Jericho Road." Well done!
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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Good chapter, Bev. I guess there are probably dozens of names for the moon in the Sioux language. Such a fascinating culture.
I enjoyed the further insights into your characters. Doctor Bloomquist is a bully, Jana is still a sensitive woman, and Rick - well, I think he's eventually going to make a move on Jana. Yea!! I want to be there for that. LOL!
Nice reading, girl. I folowed right along. Interesting activiities going on "Along the Jericho Road." Well done!
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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Thank you so much, Adrienne. I am always gratified when I get a great review like this from you. Thank you for your continued support and very generous stars. You rock! Hugs, Bev
Comment from CR Delport
I caught a few chapters of this story before, and it remains interesting. The writing is good, flows nicely and the dialogue easy to follow. A solid piece of writing.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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I caught a few chapters of this story before, and it remains interesting. The writing is good, flows nicely and the dialogue easy to follow. A solid piece of writing.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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Thank you much for your gracous review, CR. I appreciate the support. Kind regards, Bev
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Well written, Bev. I will have to keep an eye on this story as it unfolds. Forensics is a favorite of mine, so this is right up my alley. Sounds like an interesting interview to come!!!! debbie
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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Well written, Bev. I will have to keep an eye on this story as it unfolds. Forensics is a favorite of mine, so this is right up my alley. Sounds like an interesting interview to come!!!! debbie
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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Hi, Debbie. I think I would have really enjoyed a career in forensics, especially putting away the bad guys. Thanks for reading my chapter and for your generous, heart-warming review.
Kindest regards, Bev
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh Bev, this is absolutely brilliant! Every word of it! I swear it was like a fine banquet, each morsel delicious on its own, but put together with the next, ambrosia. This chapter is the best of all I've seen I think. Ten stars at least, my friend.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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Oh Bev, this is absolutely brilliant! Every word of it! I swear it was like a fine banquet, each morsel delicious on its own, but put together with the next, ambrosia. This chapter is the best of all I've seen I think. Ten stars at least, my friend.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2013
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I am very humbled by this awesome review, Dawn. I worked my tail off getting it right... so I especially appreciate that you noticed! Thank you for your wonderful words of encouragement and the beautiful stars. I appreciate them very much! Hugs, Bev
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Not at all, my friend - it's an honor to be able to review!
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You're a darling lady, Dawn. Hugs, Bev
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Hugs to you too! Thanks for the compliment, but seriously, Bev, it truly is an honor. When this book is published, I will be able to say 'I reviewed that'!
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You lift me up, Dawn. Thank you for that. Love, Bev
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Much love to you too, my dear sis.
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