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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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I think it would win, too!!! LOL I can just imagine this conversation taking place, both of you sitting at the table in the kitchen drinking your coffee. This wife is simply hilarious, I love her! You could almost make a series of stories with this couple to equal, if not overtake, Ned and Pons in the fun ranks. Well done again, my friend! :)) SAndra xx

 Comment Written 14-May-2022


reply by the author on 14-May-2022
    That idea did win, but this piece was my cynical response to that, seeing it as the worse entry in the contest, in my opinion, replete with grammatical errors. I was a bit passive aggressive that year I'm afraid.
Comment from Indie Skreet
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well no shit Bill! I thought I would take a schott at reading this since only 100 words and it simply runs off the page - wish you luck :) Indie

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2013


reply by the author on 07-Apr-2013
    Sorry anybody received this. I have been experiencing a lot of negative thoughts after my submissions garner no votes. I read the competition and figure I just don't know enough people, or I am not filling the needs of readers. Then I launch a ridiculous dealy like LAME ENOUGH and have to take it down rightaway before it festers. Thanks for looking at it.
reply by Indie Skreet on 07-Apr-2013
    proves what I already knew - small minds all the time! You keep going Bill and check out my fans mate, 'cos every one of them believes in free speech - and don't you let an pious ignorant individual stop you. best of luck Bill, Indie
reply by Indie Skreet on 07-Apr-2013
    mm, this reply probably makes no sense to you, cos I got this post mixed up with another one I read - but still, think you get the picture of me now lol
reply by Indie Skreet on 07-Apr-2013
    mm, this reply probably makes no sense to you, cos I got this post mixed up with another one I read - but still, think you get the picture of me now lol