Nina Kitten Leaves The Farm
Nina decides no one likes her and runs away16 total reviews
Comment from dmt1967
This is delightful story I loved it and I am glad the kitten went home and they were all friends again very nice picture too thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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This is delightful story I loved it and I am glad the kitten went home and they were all friends again very nice picture too thank you for sharing
Comment Written 06-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2013
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This has been my most popular story as it is the only one out of the 20 or so I've posted to get 'recognized'. It was nice to see that happen. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much.
Comment from Deniz22
A sweet little story that teaches children well on a number of fronts. Perhaps we adults need to hear the same truths again in a simple way as well! Good job! One minor suggestion:" before the dog caught up to her." This might be clarified by adding "almost". :) Dennis
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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A sweet little story that teaches children well on a number of fronts. Perhaps we adults need to hear the same truths again in a simple way as well! Good job! One minor suggestion:" before the dog caught up to her." This might be clarified by adding "almost". :) Dennis
Comment Written 05-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2013
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Thank you Dennis, I'll take a look at it again and reword it. With your review this will be the first Super Pig story to be 'recognized,' =} thank you. Have a good day. Rox
Comment from God's Writer
Another very cute and very interesting story. You certainly have a beautiful mind. I have found myself looking forward to reading your stories. They make me feel like a kid again.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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Another very cute and very interesting story. You certainly have a beautiful mind. I have found myself looking forward to reading your stories. They make me feel like a kid again.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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Thanks so much Erick. I hope you are feeling better, Rox
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I slept wrong last night so it is back to square one again. It will be a good six to eight weeks before things get back to almost normal.
Comment from adewpearl
love the alliterative names of the characters
Good use of natural-sounding dialogue
I love the premise of the story that the gosling is weary of being squeezed by the kitten LOL
your creatures are all delightful as they interact - I love the lessons they learn without the story's becoming preachy :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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love the alliterative names of the characters
Good use of natural-sounding dialogue
I love the premise of the story that the gosling is weary of being squeezed by the kitten LOL
your creatures are all delightful as they interact - I love the lessons they learn without the story's becoming preachy :-) Brooke
Comment Written 04-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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Thank you so much.
Comment from jmdg1954
I'm not sure which I like better, the story or your authors note. I think that's wonderful you incorporated a specific young girl into a charectors. She must be all smiles at that!!
I can't wait for my granddaughter to be a little older and read these to her(or at least send her a autographed copy !!)
Keep up the excellent writing Roxanne... John
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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I'm not sure which I like better, the story or your authors note. I think that's wonderful you incorporated a specific young girl into a charectors. She must be all smiles at that!!
I can't wait for my granddaughter to be a little older and read these to her(or at least send her a autographed copy !!)
Keep up the excellent writing Roxanne... John
Comment Written 04-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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Thank so much John, Almost all of my characters are named for someone I know or a special child who has touched me. Makes it more fun. I would be honored to send your granddaughter an autographed copy. =} Thank you again, Rox
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I know you do that with the names. That's great. I guess I worded it wrong in haste.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, roxanna, you did an excellent job writing this saga of the kitten that was rescued by super pig. i enjoyed reading this one. love the picture.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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this is very well written, roxanna, you did an excellent job writing this saga of the kitten that was rescued by super pig. i enjoyed reading this one. love the picture.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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Thank you very much. I enjoyed writing it. They are very fun.
Comment from RedMarie33
So cute! I wouldn't have thought that a children's story would have sucked me in,but it did! I kept reading on wanting to find out what happened to Nina Kitten. I love that the story was written from the perspective of the animals - their characters were so cute & made the story very appealing.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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So cute! I wouldn't have thought that a children's story would have sucked me in,but it did! I kept reading on wanting to find out what happened to Nina Kitten. I love that the story was written from the perspective of the animals - their characters were so cute & made the story very appealing.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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Thank you so much. I try to make them fun so the parent won't be bored to death reading them to the kids. You paid me a great compliment. Thank you, rox
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
Oh, this is darling and I love it that you names one of the characters after the little girl. It will always make the book special to her. I love the kitten picture. Great job. God loves you and so do I.
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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Oh, this is darling and I love it that you names one of the characters after the little girl. It will always make the book special to her. I love the kitten picture. Great job. God loves you and so do I.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2013
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Thank you so much Evelyn,I so enjoy your stories too. This is a great compliment coming from a writer such as your self. God Bless, Love, rox
Comment from Child of the King
Another sweet sweet story. I feel like a little kid when I read these lol. I like your new addition to the farm yard.
I will be waiting for more adventures of Super Pig--- Peace
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2013
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Another sweet sweet story. I feel like a little kid when I read these lol. I like your new addition to the farm yard.
I will be waiting for more adventures of Super Pig--- Peace
Comment Written 03-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2013
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Thanks so much. =}
Comment from GeraldS
This is an interesting children's story, and one that could be nicely illustrated by a talented artist. The piece is well written, with a storyline that would be fascinating to a child reader, or a child being read to. It was a pleasure to read.
In the paragraph beginning "It would be dark in a few hours ..." look at the third sentence: " He saw Nina favorite squeaky toy..." Shouldn't it be "She saw Nina's favorite squeaky toy ..." ??
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2013
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This is an interesting children's story, and one that could be nicely illustrated by a talented artist. The piece is well written, with a storyline that would be fascinating to a child reader, or a child being read to. It was a pleasure to read.
In the paragraph beginning "It would be dark in a few hours ..." look at the third sentence: " He saw Nina favorite squeaky toy..." Shouldn't it be "She saw Nina's favorite squeaky toy ..." ??
Comment Written 03-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2013
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Yes it should be 'she', thank you for catching that and thanks so much for the great review.
