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Viewing comments for Chapter 372 "Around the Pool"Life stories in only six words!
8 total reviews
Comment from jaliscomel
This meets the criteria for the 6 word story which should have the same criteria as any story - a beginning and a conclusion. This merely makes a statement and has no story.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2013
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This meets the criteria for the 6 word story which should have the same criteria as any story - a beginning and a conclusion. This merely makes a statement and has no story.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2013
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Thank you :)
Comment from BeasPeas
Sounds like a wild time. Identify with the red solo cup. Cannot do much in six words, but your little piece was successful in creating a story.
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2013
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Sounds like a wild time. Identify with the red solo cup. Cannot do much in six words, but your little piece was successful in creating a story.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 19-Apr-2013
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Thank you :)
Comment from Joan E.
What a clever idea--a book of six-word stories--and what a fun way to start! I enjoyed your perfect picture choice and colored text, along with the exuberance. Best wishes in the contest. Hugs- Joan
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2013
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What a clever idea--a book of six-word stories--and what a fun way to start! I enjoyed your perfect picture choice and colored text, along with the exuberance. Best wishes in the contest. Hugs- Joan
Comment Written 31-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2013
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Thank you :)
God bless you always
Comment from Starlit Ink
Oh wow, this makes me look forward to summer, and swimming and drinking by the pool. I love the color and the fun that you create in such few words. The story is upbeat and festive, welcoming the warm months coming up.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2013
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Oh wow, this makes me look forward to summer, and swimming and drinking by the pool. I love the color and the fun that you create in such few words. The story is upbeat and festive, welcoming the warm months coming up.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2013
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Thank you
Have a Good Friday
Comment from elliejean
I love the picture. I like the brightly colored letters. Summer will soon be here. Everything for a pool party is already in order. Just bring your own cup. That is the way to stay green. Great work.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2013
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I love the picture. I like the brightly colored letters. Summer will soon be here. Everything for a pool party is already in order. Just bring your own cup. That is the way to stay green. Great work.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2013
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Thank you
Have a Good Friday
Comment from shelley kaye
umm.... what's a red solo cup? :-/
kinda pushing it with the "byo" but i guess that can be considered a word (reason for the four - sorry)
good story - thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest :)
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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umm.... what's a red solo cup? :-/
kinda pushing it with the "byo" but i guess that can be considered a word (reason for the four - sorry)
good story - thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest :)
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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BYO is an abbrevetaion for 'bring your own'. It's very common. I suppose partying with friends in my younger days were pretty supermarket based. Solo cups use to come in packages of red, white and/or blue. Publix is awesome. Maybe it's just a Southern thing.
Thank you
Have a wonderful Easter
Comment from Lobengula
Well, my love, I really don't know how to review this!! Did you paint the lovely picture? I think everything's beautiful.
Oh, sorry, I see the artwork's by someone else, but I know you're quite clever enough to paint a picture like that. I like everything about it. Well done,
Love Mike
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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Well, my love, I really don't know how to review this!! Did you paint the lovely picture? I think everything's beautiful.
Oh, sorry, I see the artwork's by someone else, but I know you're quite clever enough to paint a picture like that. I like everything about it. Well done,
Love Mike
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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Thank you
Have a wonderful Easter Weekend :)
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And you, Sunny. Are you doing anything special?
Love Mike
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I'll be reading a paperback romance novel from the pharmacy and eating brownies from David's Cookies. How about yourself.... Any special plans?
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No, none. I don't think I'll be reading romance novels, though!! Still, I hope you have a lovely, peaceful time. They have finished working in your apartment, I hope?
Love Mike
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Talk about talking to a wall :)
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Am I a wall now?!!
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well done my friend beautiful creative presentation too I enjoyed and well done good luck in the contest regards Jill
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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Yes this is well done my friend beautiful creative presentation too I enjoyed and well done good luck in the contest regards Jill
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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Thank you :)
