Comment from NicciFaye

Excellent

This has inspired me to write something...if my words..this is soooo inspirational and engaging. The words of a poet affects so many people in different aspects. I enjoyed this!

 Comment Written 16-May-2013

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reply by the author on 17-May-2013

Yay...I love knowing you found this inspiring!

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I admired your vivid imagery and alliteration of "s's" in this free verse. I especially enjoyed your "song" and "treasures" metaphors in this "dance" of love. Happy Easter Sunday- Joan

 Comment Written 31-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2013

Thanks dear

Comment from Bicpen

Excellent

Excellent ... 1

A poetic piece of intrigue and seduction. It has the elements of true romance and discovery at its heart with a good structure and good use of word economy and use. It is a piece of deliberate enticement and enchantment for the reader to stir and arouse the imagination.

Good work.

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2013

Thanks Bic

reply by Bicpen on 31-Mar-2013

Anytime ... !

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Gorgeous art
lovely, fanciful use of personification
nice alliteration and imagery in spotlights of sunrise and in sense of sound
good consonance of F sounds in grace/dignity
I like the specificity of waltzing, doing the tango, pirouetting as opposed to staying with a generalized dance image
Brooke :-)

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2013

Thanks Brooke

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

Wonderful extended metaphor of dance:piroutette, sultry moves, grace, frolic,rhythms, waltz and tango. Also unique similies in stanzas five and six; metaphors in stanza one and three.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2013

Thank you Spit

Comment from Mrs Jones

Excellent

Free verse is always my favourite. Good line breaks like this make the verse so easy to absorb. The words are beautiful.
Well done as always.

Cheers
Rose

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 29-Mar-2013

thanx deae

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

How very lovely this poem is, my friend, and how welcome (since I haven't seen much posted of late from you.) Your imagery is fabulous and this verse flows like melted honey.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013

Thank you my friend. I've been a standard member the last couple of months! So good to be back!
Always a treat to hear from you. thanks.

reply by Dawn Munro on 28-Mar-2013

My pleasure.

Comment from words

Excellent

I like your wish for your words ... " if my words could dance ...

And dance they do.

Love your word-ballet.

I especially loved your ending lines:send you on your way
to find missing treasures
you've held deep
far too long

Oh
if my
words
could dance
they'd dance upon your soul

Hugs, your fan, d

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013

Thank you!

Comment from Jean Lutz

Excellent

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 Comment Written 28-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013

Oooh do tell me about the coffee! heheee

Thanks so much for stopping by. Love you so much.

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, visionary, you did an excellent job writing this free verse poem about wanting your words to dance on the poetic stage and give heart to one who needs it.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013

thanks sweetwoodjax