Surgical Words
Sometimes, words cut deeper than blades....113 total reviews
Comment from bossladyone
I like it. So much meaning in so little words. It is very nicely done. I also like the sound effects. The picture and color scheme add to the impact of the poem. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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I like it. So much meaning in so little words. It is very nicely done. I also like the sound effects. The picture and color scheme add to the impact of the poem. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 06-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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I thank you for investing your time in reading and reviewing it for me, bossladyone. It's sincerely appreciated!
Comment from Jade Lawson
This is a very good 5-7-5 poem, the syllable count is good and your word choice is great, wonderful dark brief poem, and so true. Indeed, words can hurt so much and leave a wound difficult to heal. Sometimes even actions are easier to forgive than those words that hurt so much to hear and we can't forget. Impressing presentation and artwork. Good luck.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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This is a very good 5-7-5 poem, the syllable count is good and your word choice is great, wonderful dark brief poem, and so true. Indeed, words can hurt so much and leave a wound difficult to heal. Sometimes even actions are easier to forgive than those words that hurt so much to hear and we can't forget. Impressing presentation and artwork. Good luck.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Thank you very much for such a fantastic and insightful review, Angel. I do appreciate it!
Comment from DALLAS01
Sorry I don't have a six. The combination of art work, audio and verse makes this a very powerful poem. Author notes are appreciated to understand what provoked this poem.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Sorry I don't have a six. The combination of art work, audio and verse makes this a very powerful poem. Author notes are appreciated to understand what provoked this poem.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Thank you very much, DALLAS01. The fact that you enjoyed it is six star enough for me, my friend!
Comment from Titanx9
Truer words were never spoken, and it is with pleasure that I bestow upon this fine work of art my last six stars. I'm sorry about your daughter, and it's unfortunate folks don't do a better job these days parenting their children. Most parents must notice aggressive behavior in their children, but choose to ignore it and allow these children to go out into the world and harass unsuspecting folks. You wrote an awesome piece. Great job!
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Truer words were never spoken, and it is with pleasure that I bestow upon this fine work of art my last six stars. I'm sorry about your daughter, and it's unfortunate folks don't do a better job these days parenting their children. Most parents must notice aggressive behavior in their children, but choose to ignore it and allow these children to go out into the world and harass unsuspecting folks. You wrote an awesome piece. Great job!
Comment Written 06-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Thank you so much for your kind words and review, Titanx9. They are deeply appreciated!
Comment from dmt1967
This is horrid my friend tell her not to worry about idiots like the bullies they are not worth the effort it makes me feel sick that people go around making other people feel bad no one has that right thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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This is horrid my friend tell her not to worry about idiots like the bullies they are not worth the effort it makes me feel sick that people go around making other people feel bad no one has that right thank you for sharing
Comment Written 06-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Thank you very much, dmt1967, for your kind words and insights. I appreciate that!
Comment from NicciFaye
Very true friend...very true indeed...how words can cut and leave a mark on the mind and heart....that's why we are to think before we speak and consider own words like swords because once it leaves the mouth....there is no turning back..excellent poem...great effects.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Very true friend...very true indeed...how words can cut and leave a mark on the mind and heart....that's why we are to think before we speak and consider own words like swords because once it leaves the mouth....there is no turning back..excellent poem...great effects.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Thank you very much, NicciFaye. I am always pleased by your thoughtful words and kind reviews...
Comment from G.B. Smith
Hello there DeanI regret that I have squandered all of my sixes. This is such a stark reminder that we as parents should help our children pick and chose the places that we/they have social interaction. People like the guy have no business writing such damning words that are so hurtful
Bear
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Hello there DeanI regret that I have squandered all of my sixes. This is such a stark reminder that we as parents should help our children pick and chose the places that we/they have social interaction. People like the guy have no business writing such damning words that are so hurtful
Bear
Comment Written 06-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Thanks Bear, I appreciate that my friend. The fact that you enjoyed this is a sixer enough for me! Thanks so much, again...
Comment from amahra
What a powerful poem for so few words it contains. I loved the art work. It is so stunning a real truth. Loved the sounds you add for drama.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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What a powerful poem for so few words it contains. I loved the art work. It is so stunning a real truth. Loved the sounds you add for drama.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Thanks you very much, amahra. I appreciate that!
Comment from Gungalo
words can cut deeply
with surgical precision
leaving open wounds
That's for sure Dean and boy can it hurt. There's too much of this going on because everything is so open.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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words can cut deeply
with surgical precision
leaving open wounds
That's for sure Dean and boy can it hurt. There's too much of this going on because everything is so open.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Thanks very much, Gungalo. I'd have to agree, one hundred percent...
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Smile Dean
Comment from MidnightWriter4U
(Young people are not equipped to handle cyber bullying. Anyone who hides behind a computer screen anonymously to intimidate others is nothing more than a coward whose opinion is meaningless.)
one suggestion:
"words can cut deeply"
(words cut deeply)
words cut deeply
with surgical precision
leaving open wounds
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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(Young people are not equipped to handle cyber bullying. Anyone who hides behind a computer screen anonymously to intimidate others is nothing more than a coward whose opinion is meaningless.)
one suggestion:
"words can cut deeply"
(words cut deeply)
words cut deeply
with surgical precision
leaving open wounds
Comment Written 06-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Thank you very much, MidnightWriter4U, for both your insightful review and great suggestions...
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You are very welcome. MN :)
