Surgical Words
Sometimes, words cut deeper than blades....113 total reviews
Comment from ephraim crud, COS.
tis true Dean and your post is making me want to go to the loo, so please excuse the shortness of this review :) love connie xx
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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tis true Dean and your post is making me want to go to the loo, so please excuse the shortness of this review :) love connie xx
Comment Written 07-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Hah! Sorry, Connie. It kind of has the same effect on me too, at times.
Thanks again...
Comment from samandlancelot
Dean,
The dripping water is an effective background for your important message. Hate and cutting others down seems to run rampant in today's world. Messages like your, hopefully, will open eyes to the damage it causes.
Well done!
Patricia
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Dean,
The dripping water is an effective background for your important message. Hate and cutting others down seems to run rampant in today's world. Messages like your, hopefully, will open eyes to the damage it causes.
Well done!
Patricia
Comment Written 07-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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I sure hope so, Patricia, and I thank you for your kind words...
Comment from cvcopac
Scared the shit out of me: the rushing water sound and the drip-drip of--something. A very effective means of psychological torture is to bind a person face up under a leaking faucet and allow the water to constantly fall on their foreheads. You made your point and then some. I'm sorry to hear of anyone, young or old, being subjected to bulling--of any kind. Kenny
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Scared the shit out of me: the rushing water sound and the drip-drip of--something. A very effective means of psychological torture is to bind a person face up under a leaking faucet and allow the water to constantly fall on their foreheads. You made your point and then some. I'm sorry to hear of anyone, young or old, being subjected to bulling--of any kind. Kenny
Comment Written 07-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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As am I, Kenny, it's a common problem today that I feel is often ignored. I appreciate your insights and kind review on this one!
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I think most of us experienced some degree of it as youngsters but its compounded now by the internet--and gangs.
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
You have done an outstanding job with this, Dean. And you are absolutely right about the networking circuses we have these days on social sites. They have become extremely dangerous. Well done, Giddy
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You have done an outstanding job with this, Dean. And you are absolutely right about the networking circuses we have these days on social sites. They have become extremely dangerous. Well done, Giddy
Comment Written 07-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Thank you very much, Giddy. I sure appreciate that!
Comment from Treischel
A strong and powerful expression about unkind or insensitive words that can cut to the quick, done in a well crafted 5-7-5 formatted poem. Your color scheme really makes it stand out.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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A strong and powerful expression about unkind or insensitive words that can cut to the quick, done in a well crafted 5-7-5 formatted poem. Your color scheme really makes it stand out.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Thanks Treischel. It's a big problem today, most everywhere I believe. Thanks for your insights and review, my friend!
Comment from Ridley Williams
What a thoroughly captivating and thought
provoking piece of work. The message rings
loud and clear; is the world in so much pain
that we have to take out on others? Hope your
daughters OK, all my best, Ridley
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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What a thoroughly captivating and thought
provoking piece of work. The message rings
loud and clear; is the world in so much pain
that we have to take out on others? Hope your
daughters OK, all my best, Ridley
Comment Written 07-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Thank you very much, Ridley. She's doing ok now, but tip toes far more cautiously around the social networking sites than she used to!
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, dean, you did an excellent job writing this poem about the words that cut deeply and leave scars that are hard to overcome. I wish you the best of luck in the contest and pray your daughter's bully is ashamed of themselves.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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this is very well written, dean, you did an excellent job writing this poem about the words that cut deeply and leave scars that are hard to overcome. I wish you the best of luck in the contest and pray your daughter's bully is ashamed of themselves.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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I thank you, sweet, and I echo your well stated sentiments! Thanks again...
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
A word of true feeling and experience of being surgically operated by harsh words that are so painful, rightly slated how words could cut heart sharply, often man fails to think word power. 8/707
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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A word of true feeling and experience of being surgically operated by harsh words that are so painful, rightly slated how words could cut heart sharply, often man fails to think word power. 8/707
Comment Written 07-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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The pen is, indeed, mightier than the sword, absolutely, Alcreator Litt Dear. Thanks so much for your insightful review...
Comment from playinaround
For some reason, I feel that I would like this poem better if the last line were a bit more gross Maybe I'm a sadist, I don't know. But I love it!! Excellent write!
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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For some reason, I feel that I would like this poem better if the last line were a bit more gross Maybe I'm a sadist, I don't know. But I love it!! Excellent write!
Comment Written 07-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Hah, thanks very much, playinaround. I always enjoy your witty commentary...
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Surgical Words' is an extremely well-written piece. Short, succinct and very much to the point. Not all wounds can be seen, but others may take years to heal. It was a privilege to review a work of this caliber.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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'Surgical Words' is an extremely well-written piece. Short, succinct and very much to the point. Not all wounds can be seen, but others may take years to heal. It was a privilege to review a work of this caliber.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Thank you very much, duchessofdrumborg. I do appreciate your very kind words and insight...
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Dean Kuch, you're more than welcome.
Best wishes, the Duchess
