Surgical Words
Sometimes, words cut deeper than blades....113 total reviews
Comment from Hareem.S
This is beautiful. Such a vivid poem with great imagery. I love th powerful words. Every word was carefully chosen. Enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013
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This is beautiful. Such a vivid poem with great imagery. I love th powerful words. Every word was carefully chosen. Enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013
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Thanks for such an enthusiastic review, Hareem S. It's greatly appreciated, my friend!
Comment from chasennov
'Surgical Words.' I agree wholeheartedly with you on this poem. Many people can use sharper words that cut deeper than a scalpel. Well done.
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'Surgical Words.' I agree wholeheartedly with you on this poem. Many people can use sharper words that cut deeper than a scalpel. Well done.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013
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I thank you for reading and reviewing it for me, chasennov!
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You're so welcome.
Comment from words
Love your whole presentation.
Your mutli-media posting is right on target.
Well said:words can cut deeply
with surgical precision
leaving open wounds
Bravo!
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Love your whole presentation.
Your mutli-media posting is right on target.
Well said:words can cut deeply
with surgical precision
leaving open wounds
Bravo!
Comment Written 07-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013
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Thank you very much, words. With a user name like 'words', I can't help but believe that you're right!
I really appreciate your outstanding review...
Comment from Kingsland
Words are use, for good or abuse...
This is a short poem that has a good thoughts to think about. The entire presentation is well thought out. Even the tile works in very well for the thoughts delivered... John
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Words are use, for good or abuse...
This is a short poem that has a good thoughts to think about. The entire presentation is well thought out. Even the tile works in very well for the thoughts delivered... John
Comment Written 07-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013
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Thanks very much, John. I appreciate your thoughts, my friend!
Comment from Hawaiian Mermaid
Aloha Dean,
The words sticks and stones will break my bones but names will never hurt me is a lie. You said it very well and I like the presentation. Thank you for sharing.
Aloha, Ginger
Hawaiian Mermaid
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013
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Aloha Dean,
The words sticks and stones will break my bones but names will never hurt me is a lie. You said it very well and I like the presentation. Thank you for sharing.
Aloha, Ginger
Hawaiian Mermaid
Comment Written 07-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013
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Thank you very much Ginger, aka; Hawaiian Mermaid. Your insightful review is most appreciated!
Comment from vapros
Yes, indeed, words incise. On the wall above my computer I have a framed cartoon - a knight in armor on a gleeful old horse, wielding a long pen like a lance. The caption repeats an old quote from a British author, 'The pen is mightier than the sword'.
Your verse says it very well. The dripping blood is just a bit unnerving, as usual. Be well.
v
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Yes, indeed, words incise. On the wall above my computer I have a framed cartoon - a knight in armor on a gleeful old horse, wielding a long pen like a lance. The caption repeats an old quote from a British author, 'The pen is mightier than the sword'.
Your verse says it very well. The dripping blood is just a bit unnerving, as usual. Be well.
v
Comment Written 07-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013
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Thanks very much, vapros, and I agree with English author Edward Bulwer-Lytton, who coined that phrase you mentioned, sometime in the 1800's, and I certainly agree with you, too!
Comment from mrsmajor
Yes, I do so agree, words can cause more heartache, than
a smack...Those that do such things to other young people, are sincerely in need of help...Sadly we have to prepare our children to be able to love themselves, no matter what others say...there really should be something done about this kind of behavior..but I doubt there ever will be..
I certainly wish the young lady well, it's clear she has supportive parents.....That's such a very good thing..
Thanks for sharing this with us...the pictures, though disturbing, brings the problem clearly to our minds..It needed to be done..Good Luck in the contest,
Warmly,
Victoria
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Yes, I do so agree, words can cause more heartache, than
a smack...Those that do such things to other young people, are sincerely in need of help...Sadly we have to prepare our children to be able to love themselves, no matter what others say...there really should be something done about this kind of behavior..but I doubt there ever will be..
I certainly wish the young lady well, it's clear she has supportive parents.....That's such a very good thing..
Thanks for sharing this with us...the pictures, though disturbing, brings the problem clearly to our minds..It needed to be done..Good Luck in the contest,
Warmly,
Victoria
Comment Written 07-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013
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Thanks very much for this outstanding review, mrsmajor, and for understanding the true meaning behind the disturbing presentation, This type of thing must stop, and a great deal more attention should be drawn to it.
You are most welcome, we have to continue to speak about it, poems like this one certainly will help..
Hugs,
Victoria
Comment from gazzagodbod
Had to be a big sixer for you my friend people can be so heartless when they write thier venom with no thoughts of the effects loved the poem though i need to pee after all that dripping lol gazza
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Had to be a big sixer for you my friend people can be so heartless when they write thier venom with no thoughts of the effects loved the poem though i need to pee after all that dripping lol gazza
Comment Written 07-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013
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Hah, thanks gaz. You never fail to get a laugh outta' me, even with your reviews! Now, that's talent, right there, lol... ;)
Comment from Laurie Clayton
Hello there,
There's no mistaking the imagery and message implied by your choice of words and artwork. A striking entry to the contest.
Good luck and best wishes,
Laurie
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Hello there,
There's no mistaking the imagery and message implied by your choice of words and artwork. A striking entry to the contest.
Good luck and best wishes,
Laurie
Comment Written 07-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2013
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Thanks very much, Laurie. I certainly do appreciate it!
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
A terrific 5/7/5.
Short and to the point. So very true. Sorry to hear about the bullying incident. We all have to stop and think before we speak. Your accomanying artworks are chilling as is the sound of dripping blood. The scene is set so well. Great impact created by italicizing the word 'precision.
Well done ~ Dean Kuch
bichonfrisegirl aka Connie
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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A terrific 5/7/5.
Short and to the point. So very true. Sorry to hear about the bullying incident. We all have to stop and think before we speak. Your accomanying artworks are chilling as is the sound of dripping blood. The scene is set so well. Great impact created by italicizing the word 'precision.
Well done ~ Dean Kuch
bichonfrisegirl aka Connie
Comment Written 07-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Thanks, Connie. I wanted the presentation to be perfect, because I feel it's a common problem today that needs to be addressed.
Thank you, again...
