Surgical Words
Sometimes, words cut deeper than blades....113 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Dean,
Insightful and pertinent to today's world, unfortunately. I have been in the receiving end many times and I can tell you that I know how it feels. It's especially tragic when it happens to young kids like your daughter. Good job, Dean. I want to see what your earlier work was like and it amazed me how many pages I had to go through to find this buried gem. Good job my friend. You are a very prolific writer.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2016
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Hello, Dean,
Insightful and pertinent to today's world, unfortunately. I have been in the receiving end many times and I can tell you that I know how it feels. It's especially tragic when it happens to young kids like your daughter. Good job, Dean. I want to see what your earlier work was like and it amazed me how many pages I had to go through to find this buried gem. Good job my friend. You are a very prolific writer.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2016
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Thanks for digging through the slush and the slime to get to this, Gypsy. Tiffany's suicide really shocked us all, and there were no warning signs at all.
I very much appreciate your review.
~Dean
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem's sentiment is close to being correct as far as the damage that is done. A chainsaw is probably closer to a description of the soul devastation. Sorry anyone has to experience this.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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This poem's sentiment is close to being correct as far as the damage that is done. A chainsaw is probably closer to a description of the soul devastation. Sorry anyone has to experience this.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Thanks very much for your review and very, very entertaining insight there, Bill. I appreciate it!
Comment from Cedar
You have said so much with just a handful of words. And they are so true. We all have been hurt from the sharp tongues of friends and even family. Your presentation is great. Good luck. Bill
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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You have said so much with just a handful of words. And they are so true. We all have been hurt from the sharp tongues of friends and even family. Your presentation is great. Good luck. Bill
Comment Written 09-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Thank you very much for those kind words, Bill. I do appreciate it, sincerely!
Comment from Tina McKala
This was really well written piece. Words cut deep not only in the cyber space. And to heal these wounds is so hard. Great job, precisely written.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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This was really well written piece. Words cut deep not only in the cyber space. And to heal these wounds is so hard. Great job, precisely written.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Thank you very much for your kind words and intelligent review, Tina. I really appreciate it!
Comment from Zue65
I do agree with the author, words are sharper than real blades, they cut deep, gaping wounds and eventhough the wound heals, the scar remains and the pain constant. The artwork and animated blood drips reinforced your message.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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I do agree with the author, words are sharper than real blades, they cut deep, gaping wounds and eventhough the wound heals, the scar remains and the pain constant. The artwork and animated blood drips reinforced your message.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Thanks very much, nassus1957, and I appreciate the fact that you enjoyed my 3-D Virtual style I utilized for this piece. I wanted it to make a strong statement, and I felt 17 simple syllables was not enough to achieve that goal. So far, the presentation has seemed to have helped heighten the effect of the message.
Thanks so much, again...
Comment from DR DIP
YOUR GRAPHICS ARE AMAZING! what can I say,? the metaphorical moral of this little piece does cut deep. Sometimes the shortest passage can be the most poignant!
if I was that cyber bully, I would be absolutely shitting myself if I saw this little post! I hope you sent it on your daughter's behalf! to this cyber prick..gutless little arsewipe..I lead you one of my scalpels!
DR DIP
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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YOUR GRAPHICS ARE AMAZING! what can I say,? the metaphorical moral of this little piece does cut deep. Sometimes the shortest passage can be the most poignant!
if I was that cyber bully, I would be absolutely shitting myself if I saw this little post! I hope you sent it on your daughter's behalf! to this cyber prick..gutless little arsewipe..I lead you one of my scalpels!
DR DIP
Comment Written 09-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Thanks for your enthusiastic, spectacular comments and review, my friend. I really appreciate that! A sixer...from the DR himself! I'll never wash my keypad again...
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HAHAHA fk off! you are the master of the key of the board of word
now lets not be too absurd
for ego isn't a dirty word
so for now I'll give you the bird
xxdip
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HAHAHA fk off! you are the master of the key of the board of word
now lets not be too absurd
for ego isn't a dirty word
so for now I'll give you the bird
xxdip
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Comment from Phyllis Stewart
This is true, but the despicable people who do these things WANT to wound their victims. It gives them a feeling of power. Such people are insecure and unhappy with themselves, and making someone else feel as bad as they do about themselves somehow makes THEM feel better, superior. Explain this to your daughter. The more she ignores such behavior, the more THEY suffer. They WANT her to be upset, which is why they do it. So explain that no one who knows her believes it anyway. Let her read this.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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This is true, but the despicable people who do these things WANT to wound their victims. It gives them a feeling of power. Such people are insecure and unhappy with themselves, and making someone else feel as bad as they do about themselves somehow makes THEM feel better, superior. Explain this to your daughter. The more she ignores such behavior, the more THEY suffer. They WANT her to be upset, which is why they do it. So explain that no one who knows her believes it anyway. Let her read this.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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I have, Phyllis, and she loved it! It made her feel a lot better , and we both thank you for that...
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Comment from sunnilicious
Your words are piercing. Creative and dripping with visual imagery. Well thought out. Written quite eerie too. And the sound gives goosebumps. Excellent work.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Your words are piercing. Creative and dripping with visual imagery. Well thought out. Written quite eerie too. And the sound gives goosebumps. Excellent work.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Thanks for the fantastic review, sunnilicious!
Comment from Bobby Jo
I totally agree with you. I had a friend who was litterly being abused on the internet. Actually, it was her daughter. They took her off for about 4 months. Sorry for your daughter as well.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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I totally agree with you. I had a friend who was litterly being abused on the internet. Actually, it was her daughter. They took her off for about 4 months. Sorry for your daughter as well.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Thanks, Bobby Jo, I appreciate that. She's doing good now, but she learned a valuable lesson. You have to choose your friends very wisely...
Comment from Mastery
I must say, Dean, you picked some dandy artwork for this poetry. LOL..And the poem itself is very much in tune with the human condition. Bravo, my friend. Bob
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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I must say, Dean, you picked some dandy artwork for this poetry. LOL..And the poem itself is very much in tune with the human condition. Bravo, my friend. Bob
Comment Written 08-Jul-2013
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2013
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Heh, thanks, Mastery. The hardest part was coordinating the drip, to the sound. That took some doing!
I appreciate and value your opinion very much, my Masterful friend!
