Comment from words

Excellent

Love your passionate ode to love found, Pili. I think all of us long for the deep soul connection that you describe here.
lLove your ending lines and the use of crepuscule ... will have to find a way to work this delicious word into a conversation.

Hugs, your fan,d

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2013

Pure fantasy my friend, but so are many of my poems. Crepusculo in Spanish is rather common word , not as common in English ,crepuscule is just after sunset .
We can use it in conversation easily ;-). Thank you for reading my oldies and the fabulous comment after the crepuscule . Hugs. Pili

Comment from Mrs Jones

Excellent

By chance we found
each other,
moved by
the hands of time

This to me is one of your most stunning verse. I really liked it. Smooth flow.
Good work
Cheers
Rose

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2005

Comment from tgeoff

Excellent

Hola Pili
It has been awhile and I am just getting back to the site this past week or so.
I looked you up on purpose as I always enjoyed your work.
This is exquistite and has a beauty and flow.
Good job as always. Okay, I have no idea what this word means, you big showoff :-]
Ciao
Geoff

 Comment Written 03-Jul-2005

Comment from Ice Maiden

Excellent

Hmm, where would we be without the close proximity of a pen or a pencil to quickly jot down those flows of inspiration...especially when it comes to expressing something from deep inside the soul as you have done so aptly here.

 Comment Written 10-May-2005

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

"The pen slides
sensing a presence,
responding to a
powerful call.
Words flowing free"


nicely done
thanks very much for sharing :-)

 Comment Written 09-May-2005

Comment from TomandOma

Excellent

"Let's welcome joy with all doors open, you are my light." How beautiful! This is A perfect expression of love, opening the heart and mind to join in happiness and deep commitment.

Another of your perfect expresions of emotion, this is perfect in cadence and flow. Love it!

The

 Comment Written 07-May-2005

Comment from Black Wren

Excellent

A brilliant opener to your book.
It adequately describes what is to come in the following chapters.
It is also a beautiful poem of its own standing!
Great job!

 Comment Written 07-May-2005

Comment from ladykay

Excellent

Hi Pili...

For some reason your poem has the name of Kssjas as its author!

"By chance we found
each other,
moved by
the hands of time."

Your poems are always a source of joy for me to read, be they happy or sad.

This one is no exception and I thought the lines above made for good reading like the rest of the poem.

Now tell me what is a *crepuscule*?

ladykay

 Comment Written 07-May-2005

Comment from ladykay

Excellent

Hi Pili...

For some reason your poem has the name of Kssjas as its author!

"By chance we found
each other,
moved by
the hands of time."

Your poems are always a source of joy for me to read, be they happy or sad.

This one is no exception and I thought the lines above made for good reading like the rest of the poem.

Now tell me what is a *crepuscule*?

ladykay

 Comment Written 07-May-2005

Comment from Jewell McChesney

Excellent

Let my eyes
see your face,
reveal yourself
to me, I am waiting,
fate cannot be ignored.

This picture is beautiful!
And the words match the mystery of it so well.
This sounds like something to go in my book,
The Open Door.
Thank you so much, for a wonderful read Pili.
Once again you reveal your heartfelt desire for the world
to reflect upon.

Wonderful-----
Jewell

 Comment Written 07-May-2005