Savannah Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 39 "Chapter 9, part 4"Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?
57 total reviews
Comment from angelface2
Hi I haven't read any thing of yours before this, but this is a pretty good chapter. both the characters are interesting. Very well done. Miss Sally
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2013
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Hi I haven't read any thing of yours before this, but this is a pretty good chapter. both the characters are interesting. Very well done. Miss Sally
Comment Written 26-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and welcome.
Comment from Righteous Riter
The writer does a good job of keeping the reader glued to this story. The writer does a good job of adding a hand print on the car to bring the reader closer to the mystery. Excellent job.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2013
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The writer does a good job of keeping the reader glued to this story. The writer does a good job of adding a hand print on the car to bring the reader closer to the mystery. Excellent job.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and words.
Comment from Norbanus
Sound like Billy Joe has the right idea. A spirit just appearing in the house and then walking out. Or maybe there's another secret passage. I'll bet Cash would more likely believe that.
Nicely put together chapter, Barbara.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2013
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Sound like Billy Joe has the right idea. A spirit just appearing in the house and then walking out. Or maybe there's another secret passage. I'll bet Cash would more likely believe that.
Nicely put together chapter, Barbara.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Nanashirley
I like the chapter, although I would have liked some more detail. I just got a new knee so I have been off the computer for a few weeks. I saw no need for editing.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2013
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I like the chapter, although I would have liked some more detail. I just got a new knee so I have been off the computer for a few weeks. I saw no need for editing.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2013
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I hope your recovery goes well. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mrs Jones
That's a scary hand, Excellent dialogue, so easy to read and so well edited. The story moves at a very nice pace. I don't like unnecessary descriptions, and you do it so well, giving the reader the complete picture without it. Do you know what I mean? LOL
Cheers
Rose
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2013
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That's a scary hand, Excellent dialogue, so easy to read and so well edited. The story moves at a very nice pace. I don't like unnecessary descriptions, and you do it so well, giving the reader the complete picture without it. Do you know what I mean? LOL
Cheers
Rose
Comment Written 26-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2013
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I don't like a lot of description either, so I don't write using it. I have had some reviewers suggest I use more, so thank you for your encouragement.
Comment from God's Writer
A very beautiful story. You have such a beautiful mind. You kept my interest from beginning to end. I So enjoy reading such beautiful writing. Thank you
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2013
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A very beautiful story. You have such a beautiful mind. You kept my interest from beginning to end. I So enjoy reading such beautiful writing. Thank you
Comment Written 26-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mishelly
With each post I feel like Paige and Cash are getting closer to discovering the truth. This handprint is another piece to the puzzle. I look forward to finding out if the truth is supernatural or if there is a logical explanation :-)
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2013
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With each post I feel like Paige and Cash are getting closer to discovering the truth. This handprint is another piece to the puzzle. I look forward to finding out if the truth is supernatural or if there is a logical explanation :-)
Comment Written 25-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from abbasjoy
Things are sure heating up, and getting mighty mysterious.
Definitely more questions than answers. If Paige has reached to the stage of returning to Boston, it means she is plenty scared, and things could really be getting dangerous. Good thing she has Cash and Billy Joe looking out for her.
There is a lot of action in this post, and it gives the reader an eagerness to see what is to come in ensuing chapters.
Good job!
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2013
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Things are sure heating up, and getting mighty mysterious.
Definitely more questions than answers. If Paige has reached to the stage of returning to Boston, it means she is plenty scared, and things could really be getting dangerous. Good thing she has Cash and Billy Joe looking out for her.
There is a lot of action in this post, and it gives the reader an eagerness to see what is to come in ensuing chapters.
Good job!
Comment Written 25-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and the encouraging words.
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Barbara Wilkey ...
Your interesting story has once again left me wondering what comes next. There is just one small change to suggest ...
* Where you have - A couple buddies of mine work in the police department ... This should be - a couple of buddies ...
Now, I look forward to the next chapter.
Love from ... Nanette Mary.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2013
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Hullo Barbara Wilkey ...
Your interesting story has once again left me wondering what comes next. There is just one small change to suggest ...
* Where you have - A couple buddies of mine work in the police department ... This should be - a couple of buddies ...
Now, I look forward to the next chapter.
Love from ... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the catch and I appreciate the kind review.
Comment from Carolyn Hilliard
Ah - at last a solid clue, and one not left by a ghost; they don't leave hand prints. Still enjoying the story. This was short and mixed no words. Good job
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2013
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Ah - at last a solid clue, and one not left by a ghost; they don't leave hand prints. Still enjoying the story. This was short and mixed no words. Good job
Comment Written 25-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate the encouragement.
