Savannah Love
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57 total reviews
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Love the ghost-like artwork - sooooo fitting.
Should get interesting with the P.I. getting involved. An curious Mom isn't going to just rest on her haunches either.
Good one.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*-*)
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Love the ghost-like artwork - sooooo fitting.
Should get interesting with the P.I. getting involved. An curious Mom isn't going to just rest on her haunches either.
Good one.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*-*)
Comment Written 24-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2014
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Thank you for being my #1 fan.
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You are quite welcome. really am enjoying the story, so I will be back!
Comment from Sankey
Ahhh a bit of detective work now. Good on ya as we say here. I think we all want to get to the bottom of all this. Good story more intrigue(sp?)ging as we go on.
No Spags. Just a lot of excitement.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Ahhh a bit of detective work now. Good on ya as we say here. I think we all want to get to the bottom of all this. Good story more intrigue(sp?)ging as we go on.
No Spags. Just a lot of excitement.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and dropping by.
Comment from NaughtieScribe
I don't know what irritates me more. That it took prints on the car (not the wreck in the living room) to get the guys to call in Bart. Or that the police will actually run the prints for a fee, so much for public service. This chapter was rich and entertaining as heck. Well done.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2013
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I don't know what irritates me more. That it took prints on the car (not the wreck in the living room) to get the guys to call in Bart. Or that the police will actually run the prints for a fee, so much for public service. This chapter was rich and entertaining as heck. Well done.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2013
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2013
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Thank you so much.
Comment from emjaihammond
This is very well written and a story that draws one in right away. The dialogue is done very well, and the characters are well developed. I really enjoyed reading it. Good work.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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This is very well written and a story that draws one in right away. The dialogue is done very well, and the characters are well developed. I really enjoyed reading it. Good work.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review
Comment from Rondeno
I like the way that you unfold your narrative largely in dialogue. It make the story feel more authentic and dramatic. Well done!
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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I like the way that you unfold your narrative largely in dialogue. It make the story feel more authentic and dramatic. Well done!
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Really well written and interesting. Leaves you wanting more. I saw no errors and have no suggestions for improvements. I thinks it's great the way it is.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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Really well written and interesting. Leaves you wanting more. I saw no errors and have no suggestions for improvements. I thinks it's great the way it is.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from mtnspirit
Hi Barbara,
The story is getting more mysterious with each post. Though their trying to get hand prints I doubt they'll find anything. Perhaps Billy Joe is right, maybe Paige does know something but just isn't aware yet. Great chapter and though I wanted to read more the ending was a great hook. Good job and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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Hi Barbara,
The story is getting more mysterious with each post. Though their trying to get hand prints I doubt they'll find anything. Perhaps Billy Joe is right, maybe Paige does know something but just isn't aware yet. Great chapter and though I wanted to read more the ending was a great hook. Good job and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Great chapter and real written. A mystery is developing here which should prove interesting. I look forward to the next chapter and finding out more!!! Debbie
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2013
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Great chapter and real written. A mystery is developing here which should prove interesting. I look forward to the next chapter and finding out more!!! Debbie
Comment Written 27-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from unimatrix001
Why did Cash call his mom, why not just call Karen directly, which he ended up doing anyway? Does the PI have a name, and why doesn't Cash know or use it, given how close he is to Karen? Then again, the narrator calls him "the PI." I'm expecting him to show up wearing a red shirt. He has no name, not very important, and probably gonna die.
Whoever left must've parked a ways away, or left on foot - remove comma
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2013
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Why did Cash call his mom, why not just call Karen directly, which he ended up doing anyway? Does the PI have a name, and why doesn't Cash know or use it, given how close he is to Karen? Then again, the narrator calls him "the PI." I'm expecting him to show up wearing a red shirt. He has no name, not very important, and probably gonna die.
Whoever left must've parked a ways away, or left on foot - remove comma
Comment Written 27-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2013
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Cash didn't know the PI, that's why they introduced themselves. He called his mom because he didn't know if Karen was still dating the guy and didn't want to call if they had broken up. His name is Bart, it's in the post.
Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from CR Delport
Another interesting chapter that is well written and well delivered. The story flows nicely and the dialogue is easy to follow. I could find no obvious errors.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2013
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Another interesting chapter that is well written and well delivered. The story flows nicely and the dialogue is easy to follow. I could find no obvious errors.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
