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senryu (support gun safety)

senryu

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Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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Yes this is well written my friend gun laws should be revised it seems anybody can own a gun these days and think what that amounts too well done on this write regards Jill

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2013


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2013
    Thanks so very much, Jill~Debie
Comment from country ranch writer
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Gun safety is a must we in the NRA support our gun rights. Safety first we always say keep kids aware of what guns can do,when you are dead you are dead there is no coming back. They need parental guidance and a lock box kids cant get into

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2013


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2013
    My son is an NRA member also. Guns are okay for most people. We need to do background checks to make sure the owners are responsible and safe. Thank you so very much~Debbie
reply by country ranch writer on 21-Mar-2013
    welcome
Comment from JM daSilva
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I believe a gun is dangerous in the hands of an ignorant person, or when it is easily accessible to someone who can't understand them. I don't need a gun because in my self-defense class I teach how to use anything as a weapon, but the reality is, if you don't have self-control, you should be allowed to buy a gun.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2013


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2013
    Thank you--guns have their place, but not in the hands of criminals~Debbie
reply by JM daSilva on 21-Mar-2013
    No way. But I teach how they get them in my story. This chapter http://www.fanstory.com/displaystory.jsp?id=595303
    People have to start attacking those guys.
Comment from Jumbo J
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Hi Debbie,
guns were never meant to protect, just a more efficient way to kill so you don't get your hands dirty. I guarantee that if there was no guns,the thought of hurting someone up close and personal would be far and few.
As you can see a topic that stirs the life into me. Well penned.
Kindest thoughts,
James xx

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2013


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2013
    Thank you--guns have their place, but not in the hands of criminals~Debbie xx
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
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I want any machine, rapid fire arms to be removed from the streets. Our hunters should be allowed their guns. This is a America. If you take away all guns it will just leave us defenseless as the bad guys as the bad guys are going to have guns regardless. God piece God loves you and so do I.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2013


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2013
    Thank you--guns have their place, but not in the hands of criminals~Debbie
Comment from Righteous Riter
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I like the photo is this one. The words bring the photo to life. The syllable count is correct as this piece qualifies for the Senryu poem.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2013


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2013
    Thank you--guns have their place, but not in the hands of criminals~Debbie
Comment from amada
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This is a very ironic work, just like the senryu style requires. I think the last line says it all. Killing is so easy to do these days!

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2013


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2013
    Thank you--guns have their place, but not in the hands of criminals~Debbie
Comment from Gungalo
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support gun safety
firearm proponents prefer
continued violence

Debbie we should support gun safety anyways. They are definitely here therefor you should be safe with them.

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 Comment Written 20-Mar-2013


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2013
    Thank you--guns have their place, but not in the hands of criminals~Debbie
reply by Gungalo on 21-Mar-2013
    Oooh I do agree Debbie.