Comment from Gladness

Excellent

Congratulations!!! This is a big accomplishment! I am glad I got to read through your first book. You have some great stuff here. I have found a site called querytracker.com that you can join for free. It matches you up with publishers that are looking for your type of writing. Cool idea, I think it can be very helpful.
Best wishes, I'll be looking for you in print :)Anita

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2013

Thanks for all your help and encourgement

Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens

Exceptional

Congratulations on the completion of your novel. The ending is wonderful. I personally enjoyed all that I read. It kept my interest,kept me in suspense, and it kept me wanting more. I will look forward to the sequel. The best of luck to you always. Bless you as you write and live your life, Carolyn

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2013

Carolyn thank you for all your help and encouragement and the stars. :0)

Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

This is a good chapter I liked it very much it was a nice read as it was only a plan it only needs filling out but I enjoyed the read thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2013

Thank you for your kind review

Comment from G.B. Smith

Excellent

Hi there Jo
I really enjoyed this chapter. I have been away for the past three months with bad health. I will go back and catch up. It has the feel of a good book. Nicely done
Bear

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2013

Thanks Glen for review. I hope you are much better. Jo

Comment from Righteous Riter

Excellent

All in all, I think you have done a marvelous job with this project. My thing is poetry but I liked what I have read. I wish you the best of luck and look forward to reading the completed project. Much love from the Riter.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2013

Thank you Riter for your continued support. Now my work really begins. :0)

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Hi Jo, well penned smooth read. I liked the character depth, I could pick up emotion in them easily. Strong imagery and an overall great feel good ending.
An excellent post- well done I enjoyed the read.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2013

Thank you Maureen for your kind words and encouragement.