Savannah Love
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60 total reviews
Comment from Perp Ihebom
Wow,this is really scary. This chapter is really loaded and one begins to see a solution to all the mysteries. I really enjoyed reading it. kudos
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Wow,this is really scary. This chapter is really loaded and one begins to see a solution to all the mysteries. I really enjoyed reading it. kudos
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from jaeladarling
I'm still struggling with the simple sentence thing, but the dialogue helped a lot in this chapter. :) The story is moving along nicely, and you've got us in suspense. Who's in the house? Only time will tell!
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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I'm still struggling with the simple sentence thing, but the dialogue helped a lot in this chapter. :) The story is moving along nicely, and you've got us in suspense. Who's in the house? Only time will tell!
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I have a new person checking my previous novel. I will see what she says about my sentences. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Great job on this post my friend. And still full of mystery, must admit you have me pondering throughout the read as well.
Excellent chapter for this story.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Great job on this post my friend. And still full of mystery, must admit you have me pondering throughout the read as well.
Excellent chapter for this story.
Thanks for sharing it.
Maureen
Comment Written 18-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and the support.
Comment from Bryana
Dear Barbara, this is making me more and more curious. Who in the world is in that house. I wonder if there's really another stairs, but I thought they had looked before. You sure know how to keep us in suspense and waiting for the ghost who has invaded the house.
I'll be waiting.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Dear Barbara, this is making me more and more curious. Who in the world is in that house. I wonder if there's really another stairs, but I thought they had looked before. You sure know how to keep us in suspense and waiting for the ghost who has invaded the house.
I'll be waiting.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Curly Girly
Everything read well and I found very little wrong.
You wrote this:
After a short pause, Cash glanced toward Paige and saw her eyes wide open, staring at the door,
*You cannot stare at anything with closed eyes.
Try:
After a short pause, Cash glanced toward Paige and saw her staring wide-eyed at the door,
It sounds exciting!
CG
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Everything read well and I found very little wrong.
You wrote this:
After a short pause, Cash glanced toward Paige and saw her eyes wide open, staring at the door,
*You cannot stare at anything with closed eyes.
Try:
After a short pause, Cash glanced toward Paige and saw her staring wide-eyed at the door,
It sounds exciting!
CG
Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the help. I appreciate it.
Comment from bookishfabler
another great chapter. I am trying to catch up. My foult, being absent and all. The picture is great I would love to decorate that room. LOL. Hope al is well
hugs heidi
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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another great chapter. I am trying to catch up. My foult, being absent and all. The picture is great I would love to decorate that room. LOL. Hope al is well
hugs heidi
Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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I am so glad you are back. I always enjoy hearing from you. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
Oh dear my dear this does give one the jitters. I would probably want to be going back to Boston too. I'm sure glad this is fiction or I'd have to pray for these dear ones. Good story. God loves you and I do too.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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Oh dear my dear this does give one the jitters. I would probably want to be going back to Boston too. I'm sure glad this is fiction or I'd have to pray for these dear ones. Good story. God loves you and I do too.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh wow, another great chapter part, Barbara - it's so suspenseful, your dialogue is so natural and the action they take is too! Very entertaining, my friend. :)
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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Oh wow, another great chapter part, Barbara - it's so suspenseful, your dialogue is so natural and the action they take is too! Very entertaining, my friend. :)
Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and you support. I always enjoy hearing from you.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from mshugh
Good one
Minor suggestion for you consideration
and pointed [aimed] her Ruger LCP
More action oriented?
Nice going - no SPAGs
Michael
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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Good one
Minor suggestion for you consideration
and pointed [aimed] her Ruger LCP
More action oriented?
Nice going - no SPAGs
Michael
Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I am so glad you are back.
Comment from RJFunston
Good afternoon,
I think this is the second or third post you have written. This is a nicely developed story and from the looks of it you have a sinister plot around the corner. You have a nice style of writing that is clear and easy for the readers to relate.
Great job.
Robert
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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Good afternoon,
I think this is the second or third post you have written. This is a nicely developed story and from the looks of it you have a sinister plot around the corner. You have a nice style of writing that is clear and easy for the readers to relate.
Great job.
Robert
Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
