Comment from bhogg

Excellent

Hi Barbara - I always enjoy your posts. The only thing that doesn't work for me is that Southern ghosts are not destructive. At least, the two that I've met weren't. Must be a Yankee in the woodwork! Warm regards, Bill

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013

Thank you for the kind review and I always enjoy hearing from you. You might be surprised who the perp is.

Comment from G.B. Smith

Excellent

Hello there Barbara. I have been gone far too long and will endeavor to get back into your book. I liked the feel of this. Not much changes in Paige's life it seems. What sinister devil lurks in that house. I am glad Cash is there to lend a hand
Bear

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013

I am glad your back and thank you for the kind review.

Comment from Writingfundimension

Excellent

What a great ending to this chapter, barbara. I have to agree with the men, what the heck is going on... trashing the room doesn't seem much like a ghost, but anything is possible! Well done.

Warmest regards, Bev

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013

I am not sure it's a ghost either. Thank you for the kind review.

reply by Writingfundimension on 19-Mar-2013

Oh, I'm glad I'm not the only one that finds themselves running to catch up with their story LOL. You're welcome, barbara. Xx Bev

Comment from Cumbrianlass

Excellent

Great post, adding yet more to the intrigue, Barbara. I like the hint of concern from Cash when Paige said she wanted to go back to Boston.

Yes indeed. What are 'they' looking for?

I didn't spot an spag, Barbara.

Av

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013

I am wondering what they're looking for too. Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from unimatrix001

Excellent

And tell them what? We have a ghost-infested house with secret staircases and tunnels. Oh yeah, don't forget the KKK left a mysterious note on the front door - this line describes the chapter perfectly. Lot's of questions and no answers. Very well done. Looking forward to reading more.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013

Thank you for the kind review and insight.

Comment from Auroraboreal800

Excellent

I love this chapter full of drama and suspense! I don't blame Paige for her desire to go back to Boston. She deserves an answer about all the mysteries things around this house.
WONDERFUL JOB Barbara!
:)

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013

Thank you the kind review,

Comment from allborn66

Excellent

I like the characterization. I like the dialogue. There's good conflict in this posting. I think you have a great voice.
Barbara

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from OLA THOMAS

Excellent

Hey Barbara, you have magical pen that flows well with fine words at each post. I really enjoyed this post, it is smooth. Good work.

ola thomas

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

Oh how creepy. Nothing like that has happened in my haunted house. That would be very frightening. Good job of building suspense. Enjoy the rest of your spring break if it isn't already over~Debbie

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2013

Thank you for the kind review.

Comment from N.K. Wagner

Excellent

Something is hidden in that house, and I suspect Paige's boss as the intruder. Of course that could change with more information. :D Great pacing, Barbara. :) nancy

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2013

Thank you for the kind review. I am going to be interested to see who is in her house. LOL