Comment from Lainee

Excellent

I don't know how you keep coming
up with these beautiful, fantasy/romance
poems Pili but you have done it again.
Your writing always flows so well
and paints a peaceful picture with words
that intoxicate. Amazing skill and freestyle
talent!

Goodluck,
Lainee :O)

 Comment Written 03-May-2005

Comment from SamanthaPearl

Good

Very well done and I loved the set below!

Let's leave
this world behind,
I feel so near
the light that
comes from you,
illuminating the darkness
of my night.
Mutual recognition
as our eyes meet
with a familiar smile.

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 Comment Written 03-May-2005

Comment from Ls

Excellent

A lot of images you gave me to digest that is for sure. And I did. And I loved them all. I just never was able to exactly know who this stranger was that you talked so lovingly about. Wait! But wait! Yes, now I see. I think. The stranger is that perfect lover that comes to you as your dream. Now, I get it.

 Comment Written 03-May-2005

Comment from Cloaked Writer

Excellent

Dear Author,

Come Gently is a spiritually composed poem which the author wonderfully describes a lofty picture of two people uniting in a harmonious manner as they climb on to higher ground while nurturing one another through love.

Cloaked Writer

 Comment Written 03-May-2005

Comment from 24chas

Excellent

You really have a superb gift for matching the pictures with your poem, Pili. I love the imagery in your poem, they were beautifully done. Great job.

 Comment Written 03-May-2005

Comment from clhutchinson

Excellent

Another poem with excellent and gentle imagery which flows and shines through line to line. A tender love well defined. Wonderful wording.

 Comment Written 03-May-2005

Comment from Susanne

Excellent

This poetic fanstacy is breathtaking in its simplistic beauty. I read it twice and will return to savor your words again after I finish this review.

Experiencing eagerly
the magic of our souls,
the music of silence,
the calmness of solitude,
getting lost in our dreams
of green meadows,
revealing our essence
with nude truth.

And what an ending. This is just wonderful. :-)

 Comment Written 03-May-2005

Comment from Diny

Excellent

WOW
this could even be seen as erotic... but maybe its just thr frame of mind I have been in lately... Beautiful
and if anypne ever wrote such words for me
I would be deeply
touched and a bit
flattered

Well done
AGAIN
did I say WOW
write on
Diny

 Comment Written 03-May-2005

Comment from sengwriter

Excellent

I don't know how to write few lines over here, it would definitely cut the tune of the symphony composed . Readers at large be spending some more good words for me while doing the job. Let me read it again and again and again, a feignless, candid unison of mind exposed here so divinely. You can't stop here just to earn. Read it to read, read it spread in every pores of the minds and definitely it's a poem of entirely a pure feelings of love may be with a definition yet to be discovered, yet to be set for it.

 Comment Written 03-May-2005

Comment from Ice Maiden

Excellent

This reminds me of the imagery created by one of my fave Savage Garden songs!

Silence and solitude...amazing how often those two are popping up of late.

Beautifully enchanting poem Pili.

 Comment Written 03-May-2005