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Comment from namkcirb
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Very moving and passionate remembrance to the incident. I am left a little bit at a loss. This is non-fiction? Who is it that took this ride on the train? I apologize for the question, I am not that aware of the facts of the event. Another atrocity of humankind. I have to ask out of my own ignorance. This is very well written and in the mind spoken. It reads as if written from the heart.
I believe in the words and works of God. Good and Evil. Therefore the subject is of great interest to me. Spelling, Grammar and punctuation all appear to be in order. Very interesting easy read. Perhaps in its sound, a little philosophical. It was created with great wisdom, inspiration and guidance. I like it. Thank you for sharing. Good luck and keep on writing.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2013


reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
    It is biographical non fiction ... !

    In other words it is about my experience, glad you can appreciate and be at least sympathetic over the matter. Also I much appreciate that you took the time to judge the technicalities of the piece as well as the emotions of the story itself.

    I am a Christian and this was my experience ... !

    P.S. This is a complete story of four chapters perhaps reading just the conclusion is a bit misleading if you feel you need to get a clearer picture you could start from the beginning and read at your leisure.
Comment from Frank Atwood
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Interesting story connected to your knowledge of God who you don't really know.
The evil that happens in this world is of Satan and those who are one with this world.
Those who are of the true God, the Father are never near evil as his hand is upon them and he leads them away from evil, and keeps evil away from them.

Those who are caught in the cross-fire of evils sad works are those who are part of this world which is Hell. Yet many strive hard to be one with it and not overcome it.

If Jesus had truly overcome this world, he would have lived to be an old man. His truth came from the Father who he praised in all he did and the world praises him instead of the Father. The words of Jesus leads to the Father, and through the Father one learns truths not taught by men, for they are only taught by the Father himself, who seek him over all others, even Jesus.

I liked what you wrote, but I put the Father in places you used Jesus, as Jesus would if he had read this himself. Think about it. God bless and hope I haven't offended you. Keep writing.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2013


reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
    Frank, my dear friend ... I knew you were a trip and a half but this just proves it. The Father, the Son and the Spirit are one ... The Son proceeds from the Father, The Spirit proceed from both the Father and the Son.

    Jesus Christ is God's witness here on earth, documented by any reliable bible, also he is the one to whom MY forgiveness is wrought and galvanised, through his SACRIFICE, not the Fathers sacrifice.

    As to me knowing God I know him well enough not to listen to people telling other than what my bible teaches. I know God ... get that through your thick head and yes you have offended me, IMAGINE, you know nothing about my christian faith and as far as I can see you are misconstrued in your understanding as far as my scripture teaches and you have the GALL and BALLS to tell me I DONT KNOW GOD ... I think you and me should have a discussion about who JESUS CHRIST REALLY IS ... IS HE NOT GOD BECAUSE IF YOU TELL ME HE IS NOT EQUAL WITH THE FATHER THEN YOU ARE THE EQUIVELENT OF THE JEWS THAT CRUCIFIED HIM ... MY BIBLE TELLS ME YOUR THE LIAR ... not me you nut job ... HAVE A NICE DAY !
reply by Frank Atwood on 13-Mar-2013
    The Bible tells me who Jesus is and who the Father is and where this world is in the mix of it all.
    Welcome to hell my friend and I apologize if I have offended you. I use to believe as you do about Jesus, till I was come upon by the Father's spirit and humbled to tears, and learned Jesus is my brother, as we are all brothers and sisters. Yet, we are all on different learning levels and you offend me not at all, yet when I was following Jesus, I was easily offended by those who didn't believe as I did. What I've learned is not taught in the churches of men, but by the Father himself.
    By the way, I'm a witness of God myself, as you are. Question is which God does one follow to be truly free and overcome this world instead of becoming one with it.

    God bless and would love to discuss scripture with you sometimes in another forum as I love the Bible and many other books with truth in them, that isn't seen, grasped or believed, by those who are one with this world and follow the teachings and interpretation of scripture by worldly men.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
    ... LET ME STATE THIS IN CAPITAL LETTERS FOR ANY OTHER NUT JOB THAT REVIEWS THIS PIECE TELLING ME WHAT I HAVE STATED IS NOT THE TRUTH.

    MOST OF THE WORDS IN ITALICS IN THIS STORY ARE SCRIPTURE REFERENCES IF YOU WISH TO ARGUE ANYTHING I HAVE SAID THROUGHOUT THIS PIECE PERHAPS IT WOULD BE A GOOD IDEA TO QUOTE THE REFERENCES IN ITALLICS AND MY EXPERIENCE ASSOCIATED WITH IT, THEN WE CAN DISCUSS ... OTHERWISE PLEASE REMEMBER IT IS EXACTLY 17 YEARS TO THE DAY SINCE THIS TRADGEDY AND LEST WE FORGET GOOD AND EVIL WAS AT WORK AS IS APTLY EXPLAINED THROUGHOUT THIS PIECE.

    IF ANY ONE HAS ANY QUESTIONS REGARDING MY FAITH AND THE GOD IN WHOM I BELIEVE AND TRUST WITH MY LIFE AND SOUL PLEASE PRIVATE MESSAGE ME AND I WILL BE HAPPY TO TALK ABOUT IT ...
    ... OTHER WISE KEEP YOU VAIN PHILOSOPHY AND IMAGINATIONS TO YOURSELVES.