Savannah Love
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Comment from Auroraboreal800
What a big surprise to find a hidden staircase in the house, I think this must be scary in many ways. I like how this story is going. Even the dog captures my attention and love. You're doing an excellent job Barbara!
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reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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What a big surprise to find a hidden staircase in the house, I think this must be scary in many ways. I like how this story is going. Even the dog captures my attention and love. You're doing an excellent job Barbara!
:)
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from prayingpoet
I need to go back and get caught up to this point. Good chapter, have read a few others you have written. Good guard dog for sure and smiled when I read:
"That mutt understood you." Billy Joe shook his head.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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I need to go back and get caught up to this point. Good chapter, have read a few others you have written. Good guard dog for sure and smiled when I read:
"That mutt understood you." Billy Joe shook his head.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from mizzkris20
Now I want to know if there's something supernatural going on in the house. I want to know what is going to happen next. Wow! you are an amazing writer. Waiting for the next
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Now I want to know if there's something supernatural going on in the house. I want to know what is going to happen next. Wow! you are an amazing writer. Waiting for the next
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
this is definitely and interesting story. I'm 86 years old so I've talk about real ghosts before. Janie said to tell you she hasn't had time to review since she's been with her mom in the hospital twice in the past 6 weeks. She'll get back in the swing as soon as she can. Good chapter. God loves you and I do too.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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this is definitely and interesting story. I'm 86 years old so I've talk about real ghosts before. Janie said to tell you she hasn't had time to review since she's been with her mom in the hospital twice in the past 6 weeks. She'll get back in the swing as soon as she can. Good chapter. God loves you and I do too.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. Tell Janie hi.
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
barbara:
By now, nothing about Paige's house should surprise
anyone, most especially Cash. Morgan is going to
grow up to be quite the guard dog, I believe. There
are many things I say to my Scottish Terrier, Gwen,
that she demonstrates her understanding of by her
actions.
thanks for sharing
love,
jan
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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barbara:
By now, nothing about Paige's house should surprise
anyone, most especially Cash. Morgan is going to
grow up to be quite the guard dog, I believe. There
are many things I say to my Scottish Terrier, Gwen,
that she demonstrates her understanding of by her
actions.
thanks for sharing
love,
jan
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from TonyD
The mystery thickens. Is there something super natural in that house also? What with the secret stairway? I guess I will know as I read on. You have the gift of keeping your readers on the edge of their seats.
Tony
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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The mystery thickens. Is there something super natural in that house also? What with the secret stairway? I guess I will know as I read on. You have the gift of keeping your readers on the edge of their seats.
Tony
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from amahra
You are an excellent writer. I didn't want to stop reading. You really know the writing secrets to keeping a reader engaged. It's the little stuff you do, like the parking dog and the humor when it turns out to be a little puppy. The dialogue is so genuine. And your descriptive writing really provokes an image: example, ..."ceiling to floor cupboards.
Great writing my friend.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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You are an excellent writer. I didn't want to stop reading. You really know the writing secrets to keeping a reader engaged. It's the little stuff you do, like the parking dog and the humor when it turns out to be a little puppy. The dialogue is so genuine. And your descriptive writing really provokes an image: example, ..."ceiling to floor cupboards.
Great writing my friend.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mishelly
I like the mystery in this chapter - the crooked painting on the wall, and the secret staircase. You continue building the suspense very nicely, and I can't wait to find out where the stairs lead :-)
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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I like the mystery in this chapter - the crooked painting on the wall, and the secret staircase. You continue building the suspense very nicely, and I can't wait to find out where the stairs lead :-)
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Cumbrianlass
You're adding more layers of mystery, Barbara. I'm intrigued to find out where the staircase leads.
Good post.
A few wee things:
Nothing seems out of order. - seemed
Cash stared at a photograph tilted on the wall. That's strange. Nala must've bumped it when she cleaned. Paige told me this guy's Bradley Bookman." - There's an end quote here, but not a beginning one. Not sure where it should go.
If there's somebody in here, I'm not sure how much damage your wife's pea shooter can do(.) - I don't read this as a question.
Hope this helps!
Hugs,
Av
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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You're adding more layers of mystery, Barbara. I'm intrigued to find out where the staircase leads.
Good post.
A few wee things:
Nothing seems out of order. - seemed
Cash stared at a photograph tilted on the wall. That's strange. Nala must've bumped it when she cleaned. Paige told me this guy's Bradley Bookman." - There's an end quote here, but not a beginning one. Not sure where it should go.
If there's somebody in here, I'm not sure how much damage your wife's pea shooter can do(.) - I don't read this as a question.
Hope this helps!
Hugs,
Av
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the eagle eye. I have made the corrections.
Comment from NaughtieScribe
This is another well written installment of your southern Gothic romance. The characters remain engaging, and the cliff hangers at the end keep the reader's interest. I found nothing to adjust or tweak.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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This is another well written installment of your southern Gothic romance. The characters remain engaging, and the cliff hangers at the end keep the reader's interest. I found nothing to adjust or tweak.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
