Savannah Love
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Comment from Eric Corsten
Always a great job with dialog
"I'm glad you checked on her." Cash patted his buddy's back. "Paige is in the parlor."
"Where's the note?" Billy Joe and his wife followed Cash.
Mary Pat hugged Paige. "I can't believe this is happening. You all right?'
"I'm not sure." Tears rolled down Paige's cheeks. "I don't understand."
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Always a great job with dialog
"I'm glad you checked on her." Cash patted his buddy's back. "Paige is in the parlor."
"Where's the note?" Billy Joe and his wife followed Cash.
Mary Pat hugged Paige. "I can't believe this is happening. You all right?'
"I'm not sure." Tears rolled down Paige's cheeks. "I don't understand."
Comment Written 14-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Treischel
Like the flow of this. Sweet touch with the puppy. Lots of suspense while the room search goes on. Realistic dialog. Looks like an intriguing tale. I haven't read enough to know what's going on , but definitely well written and interesting.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Like the flow of this. Sweet touch with the puppy. Lots of suspense while the room search goes on. Realistic dialog. Looks like an intriguing tale. I haven't read enough to know what's going on , but definitely well written and interesting.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Bryana
Very well written chapter. Since I love animals and especially dogs, from the beginning I fell in love with Morgan, he wants and loves attention.
I miss the chapter when you told something about the library, I will find out later.
I love your style of writing and try no to miss any chapters. To avoid it I will become your fan.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Very well written chapter. Since I love animals and especially dogs, from the beginning I fell in love with Morgan, he wants and loves attention.
I miss the chapter when you told something about the library, I will find out later.
I love your style of writing and try no to miss any chapters. To avoid it I will become your fan.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and your support of my writing.
Comment from vapros
A good grade for a good chapter. Without knowing what else has happened with these folks, I enjoyed reading the dialogue. I'm pretty sure the dog knows something's up.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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A good grade for a good chapter. Without knowing what else has happened with these folks, I enjoyed reading the dialogue. I'm pretty sure the dog knows something's up.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Hi Barbara I loved this post. You've brought in the hidden staircase and opened the mystery a bit more. Well penned as always and such great detail makes me want to keep reading.
Ends too soon:)
Thanks for sharing this one. Exceptional writing.
Maureen
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Hi Barbara I loved this post. You've brought in the hidden staircase and opened the mystery a bit more. Well penned as always and such great detail makes me want to keep reading.
Ends too soon:)
Thanks for sharing this one. Exceptional writing.
Maureen
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review. I always appreciate hearing from you.
Comment from Amused
Nicely done. I haven't read the story prior but certainly wish I had. I am intrigued even by this small offering. I look forward to reading more.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Nicely done. I haven't read the story prior but certainly wish I had. I am intrigued even by this small offering. I look forward to reading more.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from mbagby23
I wish I could have started from the 1st chapter I like where you are at in your story. If you have gotten this far you are doing a great job keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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I wish I could have started from the 1st chapter I like where you are at in your story. If you have gotten this far you are doing a great job keep up the good work.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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You gave me four stars, but a 5 star review. I am not sure what I need to fix to make 5 stars for you. Usually when a reviewer gives 4 stars they tell you what to correct. Welcome to FS.
Comment from Flamingbush
This is another nice chapter, with a good bit of intrigue regarding that button. It looks as if Cash and Billy Joe have their hands full of things to investigate. Though I haven't kept up with all the chapters, it's an easy read and not hard to figure out - something or someone has been spooking Paige and Nala. Hmmm. The page turner continues...
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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This is another nice chapter, with a good bit of intrigue regarding that button. It looks as if Cash and Billy Joe have their hands full of things to investigate. Though I haven't kept up with all the chapters, it's an easy read and not hard to figure out - something or someone has been spooking Paige and Nala. Hmmm. The page turner continues...
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're very welcome. Blessings.
Comment from Carolyn Hilliard
It came out well. I also enjoyed it, but I suspect Cash is wrong and there will be a tunnel.
Glad to see it has been well received.
Enjoy your spring break, please.
Carolyn
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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It came out well. I also enjoyed it, but I suspect Cash is wrong and there will be a tunnel.
Glad to see it has been well received.
Enjoy your spring break, please.
Carolyn
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from neharika.m
hi, lovely chapter. i have read it spontaneously. you know the readers pulse & know how to satisfy it. well done. keep writing. good luck, your style is nice.the suspense is building up. Look forward to more.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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hi, lovely chapter. i have read it spontaneously. you know the readers pulse & know how to satisfy it. well done. keep writing. good luck, your style is nice.the suspense is building up. Look forward to more.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
