Savannah Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 36 "Chapter 9, part 1"Can a fallen confederate soldier encourage love?
71 total reviews
Comment from Jerry Rauhuff
Reads fine and I can't find any mishaps or typos to speak of. I haven't read the entire book but this chapter seems that it could be a part of an interesting story. Pic definitely goes with story.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013
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Reads fine and I can't find any mishaps or typos to speak of. I haven't read the entire book but this chapter seems that it could be a part of an interesting story. Pic definitely goes with story.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from OLA THOMAS
This is another good post with its smoothness of delivery and fine dialogue lines. I enjoyed this one like the previous ones I was previledge to read. Good one.
ola thomas
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013
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This is another good post with its smoothness of delivery and fine dialogue lines. I enjoyed this one like the previous ones I was previledge to read. Good one.
ola thomas
Comment Written 15-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Writingfundimension
A nice set-up for more intrigue and drama, barbara. Clues galore, but nothing really too clear fom the sleuths yet. Fine pacing and great dialogue. Warmest regards, Bev
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013
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A nice set-up for more intrigue and drama, barbara. Clues galore, but nothing really too clear fom the sleuths yet. Fine pacing and great dialogue. Warmest regards, Bev
Comment Written 14-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and your support.
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You're very welcome, barbara.
Comment from Mai Mai
This is an interesting piece. I've missed quite a bit, but I think I'm keeping up. The writing is still very good. Good job and good luck.
Mai Mai
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013
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This is an interesting piece. I've missed quite a bit, but I think I'm keeping up. The writing is still very good. Good job and good luck.
Mai Mai
Comment Written 14-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from lappmellott
I think your chapter is well written, but I think it's a bit confusing. Are you referring to there being a ghost in the house. Perhaps Union and Confederate soldiers? I'm sure in the actual book, it would make more sense than just reading a part of a chapter. Keep writing.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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I think your chapter is well written, but I think it's a bit confusing. Are you referring to there being a ghost in the house. Perhaps Union and Confederate soldiers? I'm sure in the actual book, it would make more sense than just reading a part of a chapter. Keep writing.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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All of this is explained in previous posts. I break my chapters up because I work full time and don't have time to post entire chapters. Thank you
Comment from Curly Girly
It read well and I could find no problems with SPAG. It all sounds rather mysterious! With secret staircases and maybe tunnels... Intriguing.
CG
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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It read well and I could find no problems with SPAG. It all sounds rather mysterious! With secret staircases and maybe tunnels... Intriguing.
CG
Comment Written 14-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Mrs Jones
Sorry to come in on chapter 36, which means of course that I don't know the story. I can try to review the writing though. Well edited. An excellent write and easy to read. Now I am curious about the tunnel.
Good work
Cheers
Rose
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Sorry to come in on chapter 36, which means of course that I don't know the story. I can try to review the writing though. Well edited. An excellent write and easy to read. Now I am curious about the tunnel.
Good work
Cheers
Rose
Comment Written 14-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review and welcome.
Comment from Karen Payton Holt
Hi Barbara, another nicely paced post.
The hidden staircase is an intriguing detail, the mystery deepens. Well written as always and the characters leap from the page.
I love the puppy being in the mix as always.
Great stuff.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Hi Barbara, another nicely paced post.
The hidden staircase is an intriguing detail, the mystery deepens. Well written as always and the characters leap from the page.
I love the puppy being in the mix as always.
Great stuff.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Taffspride
Once again you manage to keep your readers interest throughout the entire chapter, and you use dialog well to keep your story moving.
Hmm! A secret staircase and... maybe a secret tunnel? Now that could explain some of the strange happenings. But more importantly, now we need to know why. Could there be something of value hidden? Or is there some connection to the underground railway?
You weave your story well, I cannot wait for the next chapter.
Thanks for this latest chapter.
Iechyd da
Ann
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Once again you manage to keep your readers interest throughout the entire chapter, and you use dialog well to keep your story moving.
Hmm! A secret staircase and... maybe a secret tunnel? Now that could explain some of the strange happenings. But more importantly, now we need to know why. Could there be something of value hidden? Or is there some connection to the underground railway?
You weave your story well, I cannot wait for the next chapter.
Thanks for this latest chapter.
Iechyd da
Ann
Comment Written 14-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
Comment from gypsycaravan
Your dialogue is excellent and puts this reader right in the room with the characters. I walked behind them because I was scared, though. Ha. For a quick post, my quick read appeared spag-free to me. Very well done.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Your dialogue is excellent and puts this reader right in the room with the characters. I walked behind them because I was scared, though. Ha. For a quick post, my quick read appeared spag-free to me. Very well done.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2013
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Thank you for the kind review.
