Comment from reconciled

Excellent

Hey Noun...-smile- guess who...-wink- Okay...wow where to start...hmm.. how bout a pronoun...to Presumptuous?...lol Anyway wonderful...you did it again...good stuff Damn adjectives are irritating me... love you Michael

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 Comment Written 12-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013

Well well...I should have known....'you' would make an
entrance like this! LOL...wink..won't be left out dear
imaginative Michael, have a poem coming up on "Grammar Party"
and will include all those other parts of speech 'breaking free'
and woohoo...all over the place. Adjectives irriatating you..
hard to believe...smile......anyway glad you enjoyed and got
a kick out of this one....00...loveRonni

reply by reconciled on 12-Mar-2013

Grammar party...O yea, I met her second cousin...Pajama...lol wow...what a warm thought....excuse me....-smile-

reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013

Of course you would be familiar with
second cousin "Pajama' LOL...and apparently
still left you with plenty of 'warm"
thoughts....smile...you're excused....
woundn't want you to be too embarassed...LOL
Have a 'cool' drink on me.....smile..o Ronni

reply by reconciled on 12-Mar-2013

I'll be right there....no...you said it...on my way...-smile-

reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013

So..you indeed arrived for the cool drink!
Sweet surprise! Enjoy it? I absolutely did!
smile...:)... You never ceast to surpirse!
smile...

reply by reconciled on 12-Mar-2013

Wait a minute....I REALLY want to remeber this....what happened? was I a gentle man? Jesus ronni that wasn't me....that was the lawn boy...O shit...what happened?

reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013

Wasn't the lawn boy! Gentleman you were!
Was just a delightful cool drink break...
smile...GOODNIGHT...all ok..your Mmma
raised you right....sleep tight...smile...
loveRonni

reply by reconciled on 12-Mar-2013

O....didn't miss much then...good -smile- Alright fair Lady...lights out...sleep tight...I bite...-wink-

Comment from TWColvin

Exceptional

I really enjoyed this poem and it made me smile, laugh out loud & giggle. Great word use and concept. Keep writing, cause you were born to do it!

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2013

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reply by the author on 12-Mar-2013

Thank you, and wow especially for the extra star....so happy
you enjoyed and appreciated this....and thanks for such a
marvelous compliment...best wishes always...Ronni